View Full Version : Little warm up keystyle..


BaD_AsS
10-12-2006, 10:17 PM
I been outta this rap shit for a while, so I need to do a clean up key...


Tuck-In-Ya'-Chain, I'm Fuckin'-Insane, Bullets Crushin'-Ya'-Frame,
Fuck-With-This-Game?, Leave Yu Up-In-The-Flames, With Somethin'-Insane,
Cuttin'-Ya-Veins, Commin' With Bombs-N'-The-Clips, Toppin'-Ya-Shit,
Droppin'-Yu-Kids, Swear To Be A Vet, But Yur All Talk-N'-No-Spits,
Holes-N'-Welts, Pulled-From-Hell For Those Who Know-Me-Well,
Yu'd Think Yu Woulda Just Ate A 'Pasta Dina' The Way Yu Left 'Full-Of-Shells',
Ya'll Hate-When-I-Burn-This, Anticipatin' As Yu Wait-For-The-Verdict,
'Cuz My Lyrics Are Hot, Like They Was Straight-From-The-Furnice,
Who's-Hard? Give Yu New-Scars, Lyrics Too-Flawed, Leave The Booth-Awed,
'Tudes-Raw, Crackin', Collapsin, Clashin', Leave Yu Flattined In A Few-Bars


Idk, I just need to elivate again.

OvaDose
10-13-2006, 01:10 AM
some really forced multies in there

DeA†h
10-13-2006, 01:25 AM
Your Multies Were Awesome And Weren't THAT Forced But Was Better Than Most Of Them Cats Here. Similies Were Ok, Structure= Ok. But If You Think You Want To Improve More, Then Go Ahead, Man.

Diatribe
10-13-2006, 02:38 AM
Youve elevated good job I dont get why people are so into multies now you dont need em to have a sick flow they help

OvaDose
10-13-2006, 04:34 AM
In some cases i think they kill the flow especially in audio when the cat is not that good.

Bank™
10-13-2006, 01:24 PM
bad ass!!!!...... stay active kid...




nice little key... you coulda done better...






i also use ALOT of multies...

Carnage™
10-13-2006, 02:06 PM
Nice multies, there was nothing wrong with them, man. They weren't forced, they were nice. IT's just that you lacked creativity in some lines, although for a keystyle this was nice. I have to say though:



Yu'd Think Yu Woulda Just Ate A 'Pasta Dina' The Way Yu Left 'Full-Of-Shells'

"You niggas gots to be punched, act stupid get shells in your stomach like you ate pasta for lunch"

BaD_AsS
10-13-2006, 03:50 PM
"You niggas gots to be punched, act stupid get shells in your stomach like you ate pasta for lunch"

Where's that from? Because I haven't heard that... But I dunno =\ I actualy thought I was being clever lol...

Hey Banks, nice to see ya!

Glad ya'll liked it, 'specialy since ya'll seen me elevate through the year...(s)