hey people look who'z back,
even more crazy insane and wack,
and no im not drunk or high on crack,
im just wacked and happily stacked,
with a whole new set of rap'z,
i'll keep this up all day and night,
and i'll be da one walkin away from da fight,
I'll leave you behind wid out ur sight,
so scared thinkin im still there you'll die of fright,
while i'll be dissin you in my fabulous spotlight,
which you could never handle cause of ur stupid stage fright,
even though im not black im just a white,
i'mma still come down wid this shit right,
I'll keep it goin, and there will not be any weakness i'll be showin,
now my blood iz really flowin, now my mind iz really blowin!
i've even devoloped a liking for lindsay Lohan,
now that'z something nobody should be knowin,
but you see i dont even care,
what are doin just standin there?!
you frickin making me mad breathing my air!
and why do you other'z have to frickin stare!?
get the hell outta here if you wanna be spared!
screw you all i'll kill you,like i actually ever cared!
this iz where i make you sound retarded,
even though im just a kid that just started,
who know'z maybe ur about to be outsmarted,
and im only 14 how could this kid seriously be that mean,
now i'mma start a thriller and come right through the screen,
dressed az a killer from the rad movie Scream,
so you better get lost before ur the subject of this murder scene,
now what'z a matter? dont know what to do?
cause of these hatefull word'z i spew,
that make'z an retarded idiot outta you!
You see all i do iz hate and discriminate,
in these rhymn'z and line'z that i make,
but that'z because thiz iz easy az cake,
i hardley try and i still get a really high rate,
but hey mate, you mess wid me you gotta except your own fate,
so dont act tough dont even fake, unless you wanna be raped,
just get outta here you know ur gonna get baked,
and yes i'll even be raper, i'll do anythin to get a spot in da paper,
the earh will be takin apart me the earth shaker,
who care'z im not freaking care taker, im the evil people fryin crazy baker,
yup im just a little kid from haides, that got kicked out for stealin all da lady'z
and biting the devil and i had raibes, he waz discusted cause i have scabes,
but there'z no maybe'z i waz still hot enough to get all the ladys,
and no im not tryin to act like your Slim Shady,
im just a little crazy and lil bit dazy,
and that'z why they call me Shaney Insaney.

its wack as fuck, you gotta learn the shit before you just go writin some shit. use mulitple syllable rhymes and punchlines...

whatever i'll take that into consideration...

naw you really should^^

seriously PM someone for help

aight well why dont you guy quit raggin and help him hit me up on aim or windows messenger Ill help you improve ya shit man

lol thats what i was telling him to do.^

pushin through life..

Okay now yall listen, i know you think i suck at dissin,
and i think the point ur missin, when your in ma position,
it'z tough to make da decision and lay it down wid precision,
against these politician'z, and conquer em wid true demolition,
im havin a hard time, keepin the punch line'z in my bunch of rhymn'z,
but not everything iz workin fine in this fucked up mind of mine,

once i start the weed'z, i never can stop da feed'z,
like how much do i actually really need'z, bitch im wastin all my seed'z,
the police wanna catch me they better come wid speed,
b4 i plan it out and flee, leavin not a single lead,
but who know'z i can be clut'z, if i blow'z it i think i'll go fuckin nut'z,
i'll leave yall dead or marked wid cut'z, but first i'mma slap all yo lady'z butt'z,
just ta make you mad, well you have any idea how my life so fuckin sad,
i waz just a poor lil lad, wishing to had a life i really could never have,

see my life really blow'z, where it'z gonna end up? Nobody fuckin know'z,
i keep it together wid ma bro'z, beatin the fuck outta all of our foe'z,
but wid this tension, i need ta be dispensin some not ta mention,
pay da bill'z for this shack im rentin, i cant wait till i get my pension.

So wadda ya think about that brother'z? wack right Lol, I know i still got a lotta work.