Fly on my own now, fuck a crew this is studio time for one
I’ll sit on the throne, how? Knock the rest down like an anti-aircraft gun
Rip open your chest, piercing your neck leaving you nothing but a bereavement
You’ve infested rap, sucking the life out so that like you its barely breathing
I’ve returned to perform CPR to the game, hoping to throw it a lifeline
The world sees you as lame emcees, and I’m out to stop your flow and your lifetime
This is like treatment for cancer, remove the problem before its out of control
But in this case, the answer would be to dispose of the rap game in its whole

it was nice u had some good multies ive probly seen better but i havnt heard much from u so i dont remember lol

but nice

Man, Sirius,...You Gotta Elevate Bad....That Piece Had Barely Any Multies, No Lines That Really Stood Out And The 2nd Bar Didn't Even Rhyme.

You Need To Start Being Creative With Words, Just Writing Something Doesn't Always Work. Think Your Words. Spend Some Time On 'Em.

^ Yeah, I hadn't spat anything in a while.
Thanks for the feed.

i knoew..same with me so my battle with cullision sucked but im trying to write more to elevate again

The 2nd Bar Didn't Even Rhyme.

yes it does, depends how you say "Bereavement" and "Breathing" it can sound alike.

yeah the second bar did rhyme..