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most peoples dont drop 2 links where the fed ,lol but people should because this site needs mroe activity

OH and it was good to i liked that verse

Nice Shit. Your Similies & Multies Were Well-Put. If You Could Expand Your Wordplay, Then You'd Be Untouchable. Keep Up -1-

^^Honestly this shit waz a quick Key, Just wait untill you see me battle someone lolz... I usealy only write my verses for a track

lol @ quick key.... no... you used like 5 lines i seen from you allready and this is only your second drop that i've seen thus far...


other than that.... nice multies... nice flow... nice wordplay...


keep droppin..

its jsut the one he used to try out fro any crew..he deleted fromt he thread cus he made swat..so technicly its a key...i tihnk

it was straight man flow was on point lines were good multies were good not bad at all

This was cheesier than my foreskin

Caution he pawns u so stfu

yeah it was ok...nothing special though....pretty generic stuff...and played out punches really..

loved the last line man keep it up

Yo man that was a very nice drop i'm new on here but i've been rapping and writing for about 2 years (which is still new to the game i understand) but alot of corums i'm on (except wucopr) most people gain respect with having little or no skill at all. That drop proved my suscpican that this site was just a bunch of eminem wanabees begging to suck his dick. hahahaha
anyway though nice drop

^^^I really dont listen to Em, I stay on that underground tip, feel me.. but thanx for the feed

Good shit, though pretty generic. I look forward to seeing you drop more stuff.