Heres another verse uppin for feedback

There’s no excuse for abuse that produces hating,
suicidals think that the noose is waiting,
lose the will to live, there’s no use relating,
they start feelin’ melancholy and hallucinating,
it's truth im spraying, some people are miserable,
u might not notice 'cause it may not be visible,
we need to get rid of all hate 'cause people are pitiful,
their mental state is fucked so they take it to physical,
then they quit it all, till their non existent,
no depression in their lives that was all persistent,
bodies here but their minds have gone a distance,
soul leaves earth now they have Gods assistance,
consistent thoughts in the mind of a young man,
in his corrupt mind, man he only has one plan,
he wants to become a no one among man,
take a rope, tie it, now he's a hung man, now he's done...damn

really liking your drop cuz..I think you have a really similar style to me and this topic really appealed to me

keep writing and the feed will come

thats dope... nice multies... you put a picture in my head man... nice drop and keep this shit up...

your other one was way sicker but this is pretty good keep it up man

nice i should rep u just because lol

You should rep me too.

Anyway, this was pretty nice, a little short, though. But it had some nice multies and the story told was alright, too.

o.k ill rep u carnage lol