This is one of my verses I put at another site, uppin' for feedback

Soon as the pen touches the paper and the ink starts to spill,
I try to pour my heart out and just think hard but still,
I just sink farther till, I cannot think no more,
Like im locked in a room with one single door,
This ring of horror, will it ever cease,
Will I ever create a single clever piece,
Will I forever seek, the feeling of fame,
or just sit here writing and revealing my pain,
it’s like im kneeling in rain, and I just can’t get out,
I try to stand and shout but someone clamped my mouth,
I’m panicked now, and my time is up,
this writers block got me feeling like my mind is stuck,
it’s kinda fucked, but I still don’t quit,
never stop writing rhymes, and I’m still gon spit,
the key still don’t fit, so ima break the door,
now my writers block is gone so create some more

intresting not as good as reapers eye lol

Shit waz cool, I enojyed ya multiez, they were simple but fit well with the peice.... Flow waz a little off, itz like u had to slow down at the end of each line sometimez becuz of the multie, so u need to work on that, other that shit, it waz cool homie, keep it coming ~1~

iut was a pretty nice piece not as good as Solo's drop but still godd. I can kinda realte to what your saying on there where theirs just nothing that inspires you at the moment/