You wonder why they call me chillah, because they’re constantly telling me ~ to ~ chill
Cause when the anger builds up im like a caged lion constantly ready ~ to ~ kill/
Stop talking shit, you aint an emcee, I’ll make any one of you bitches drop ~ and ~ run
When it comes to packing I aint empty, so when you see me don’t be afraid to cock ~that ~ gun
Aim that shit at me, I’ll look straight down the barrel and laugh, you aint man ~ enough
I got my death sorted, suicide and im taking you cowards with me but the plan ~ is ~ rough
Im thinking a killing extravaganza after writing my very last stanza as a death note
Then swallow 50 fucking pills and slit my throat watching my blood drip down as I read what I wrote
Asking for forgiveness as I Reminisce on my life of sins as I pass over to the other ~ side
Welcome to the underworld, everything’s silent but I can hear the sound of my mothers ~ cry
Thinking I’ve made a mistake, played to near to the edge of suicide, I got to close
At least now I can fully understand the true meaning of an OvaDose

ive seen better from u dude

bump! yo!

This waznt very good.... U need to make ur linez shorter, Try and say what u want in less, feel me, and u linked the 2nd line like it waz a multie but it diddint even coraspond, mos def work on ur flow then anything else becuz like i said, ur long linez throw off the flow and i can tell this waz forced, but keep spittin ~1~

Long Lines Aren't Really A Problem....Only When You Have A Pair Of Multies In 1 Line, Multies In A Line Helps It Flow Well. If You're Like

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^That Type Of A Syllablistic Shit Doesn't Help In Long Lines...You Need To Have Like..

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^That Helps It Flow A Bit Better.

And Atleast You Got Emotion In Your Piece. You Got Everything In You To Become A Top Textcee. All You Need To Do Is Tap It.

So Keep Up....Be Creative. -1-

@ solo - rea"dy~to~Kill" and "me~to~chill" is a multie

thanks for the feed
Thanks kai means a lot

^^^Itz a shitty multie then....lolz

ya im not really in to stretched lines because it makes me lose intrest but like Kai said u have potential to be on the top..and since ur 14 u have a good couple of years rapping to elevate skill unbelievably

^^^Itz a shitty multie then....lolz

Why? Because you Couldnt pick it?

@ Keystyle, thanks cuz, i mean start em young ae

Go Vote On Me And O.ds Battle Bitchs

U need to make ur linez shorter

thats the main thing i gotta say

@ solo - rea"dy~to~Kill" and "me~to~chill" is a multie


thats forced man
4 syllables
3 syllables
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not a multie