Its a lil quick spit

~Yea Bitch we are here to stay and we are called Twisted Mentality~
~And while i spit my best ima give you some originality ~

~We are the hottest out there Besides Dynasty And K.A.L~
~So if ya see us dropin Rymes We'll turn on the Warning-Bell~

~We gonna take this shyt far from the hot to the Best in the world~
~Man we are uncovering like columbas finding a new-world~

Its a lil quick spit

~Yea Bitch we are here to stay and we are called Twisted Mentality~
~And while i spit my best ima give you some originality ~

~We are the hottest out there Besides Dynasty And K.A.L~
~So if ya see us dropin Rymes We'll turn on the Warning-Bell~

~We gonna take this shyt far from the hot to the Best in the world~
~Man we are uncovering like columbas finding a new-world~

first of all dynasty is gone and has been gona for a while...







p.s

try to rhyme syllables...

like...

Yea Bitch we are here to stay and we are called Twisted Mentality
bitches won't battle me... no crew?... ya just missin ya cavalry...


and try to make punches... like one punch in each bar.... use more multies...

think of what to say and then rhyme it.... that is all...

ight thx bank

hey but great rap songs arent about punches

hey but great rap songs arent about punches


yeah but in this case it's not a great rap song and this kid is simply learning the basics of rap right now...

yeah but Dynasty might come back if scorp and xo and Ben make up and we all start talking our audio more serious but just like bank said work on making ya verse a little more complex man multies help a lot the first and last syllables have to match rhyme scheme and have he same amount of syllables for the whole thing man work on some punches something that makes people go whaaaat

^shhh....





p.s... they have all made up and we <3 eachother... especially me and xo... ;)

yeah but Dynasty might come back if scorp and xo and Ben make up and we all start talking our audio more serious but just like bank said work on making ya verse a little more complex man multies help a lot the first and last syllables have to match rhyme scheme and have he same amount of syllables for the whole thing man work on some punches something that makes people go whaaaat

We "made up" ages ago, LOL.

It's just that Scorpio left, Alyssa doesn't do text, and hardly posts at boards, and I just.....only do this sometimes. I haven't dropped text in months, even then it wasn't anything serious and it was the first time in months, LOL.

Lol THX FOR THE FEED PEOPLES