We need more active threads so here it is
you post one bar from one of your songs/freestyle/...etc & the next emcee rate it & post up a new bar from his shit....put up the title of the song you posted your bar from.

here we go:

"My life is like a huge deciduous tree
every thing is fallin' down beside just me" - "46 Lines About Life"

8/10 I had to look up deciduous though hahahaha

pause-/.P.\

redrum=murder-read backwards

quick rips-will-just-burn-ya swallow ya redrum
spit-out-ya-murders
cripple-and-churn-em throw knives /.p.\ mc on tables
whip-out-and-turn-em

fuckin 10/10...




"chiefin, sleepin, eatin and drinkin
i'm doin all these things but especially on the weekends"

5/10

I wanna fake my death to see the worlds reaction/
i wonder what id see, tears or laughin/...

8/10

You give me breath, you give me sanity
You're always gonna be the biggest fan of me

7/10

they say whoodini was the geatest excape artist/
i wonder if he could live my life n excape the darkness/

hmm.

7/10ish

''I-FLIP-THE-MAG-AND-GET-THE-CLAPPIN IF IT-HAPPENS-RIP-HIS-JACKET
SPLIT-HIS-BACK AND LIFT HIS HEAD I'M GETTIN-AT-HIM (Ha!!)
PICK UP A DIFFERENT MAG AND THEN ATTACK-HIM-WHEN-I GRAB-HIM-SHIT IS-BLASTIN
WITH-A-PASSION-GET-IT-CRACKIN-THE-ASSASSIN, YOU LET 'EM''

-0/10....It Should Be Yours^

I shoot my fists through into ya heart to see it still flutter.
Watch u in flabbergasted stance as one .L1EF. kills another.

8/10 I had to look up deciduous though hahahaha
lol...:D I look up tens of words daily so I know how you feel!
I shoot my fists through into ya heart to see it still flutter.
Watch u in flabbergasted stance as one .L1EF. kills another
7/10

"when you get mad cuz of that stupid dad
remeber that nuthin' have pleased you like music had -"Dedication To Music"

8/10

gonna be beggin for mercy when I finish this,
you deflect skills like you deflect tits!

haha 7/10 cuz

Your death is overdue like your rhyme’s there played out and chronic/
Im demonic with rhymes that are harmonic, you could say that’s ironic//

7/10

Known to hold it down when I'm around
Hold the heata when the bad boys peek round
Fight tooth and nail in my town
We silence this shit, so you don't hear a sound

you should have put your bar the other way 7/10^

wires-and-lines write-and-dump-toxic
high-all-the-time I fight-with-blunt-objects
cunt left uncontious dropping my rhymes

EDITbanK!!--420/10 ^Isn't It Kinda Unfinished?

Continuation Of Urination Cause Intense Chemical Reaction.
Misappropriation Of Verbalization Has MC's In Burial Adaption.

P.S: Frank Is Awesome!!

naw dude my flow styles is to use 3 lines with multies to match out the flow if you heard me spit it in a verse I ll show you what I mean

Continuation Of Urination Cause Intense Chemical Reaction.
Misappropriation Of Verbalization Has MC's In Burial Adaption
6.5/10
"you won't be sick enough to beat this Arabian dude
even if you get a cough with some Avian flu"

-"Introducing Deis"

7/10

they say god loves ugly/
thats must be why gods always tryin to fuck me/

7.5/10
"too many devil's not only one he's tightly besieged
he cries out loud hopfully he might be believed" -"Devil On my Bed"

9/10

Im shooting impaired like tweekers with tubes in there ears
got more twist in my flow then the loops in the snair

9/10

This shit is ridiculous, someone ratted-me-out
The cops busted in, we just had-the-weed-out

^8/10
"rhymin' words is my only occupation
I never use it for livin' just to rock ya nation" -"Outraged "

7/10

"Like a sword is my lyrical sharpness which tears your fabricated hardness
Leaving your reputation in shards like being declared retard kids"
- Quick bar on MSN

7.6/10

i flip-the-scribt and hit-the-bitch you-grip-this-shit to-snip-my-clip i dip-his-shit to-split-his-lip im getting at em

-upcoming song ''touch it remix'' (featuring diatribe & cullision)

7.5/10
"Life is hard & I truly believe this
we give all what we got & never receive shit" -"?"

9/10 so damn true man

Ill have you rappin ya head like a turbin yo
Im an urban flow you just an herb and flow

5/6 just because i have heard the turban thing a million times

Go against me and get hung with the pagans/
feel the burn in my lyrics when i summon the dragon/

Go against me and get hung with the pagans/
feel the burn in my lyrics when i summon the dragon/
7./10
how could you...
you chated on me for that rich guy
bitch why? I was like an old lipstic you ditch right?

5.9/10

I'd Tap That Ass And You Cum In My Trunk.
Eatcha Crack Like You Got Buns In The Bum...lol

6/10

have rappers asses hurtin, they aint sittin well
cuz the guns in there mouth have um shittin shells

5.1/10

I Must Mutilate And Murder Murderers With Murderous Murkage.
And My Soul Barkin With Hell In Me By Changin How Cerberus Is Portraid.

I'd like to see you pull ^THAT^ off in audio.

liefs 7/10 just because of the alliteration..even tho it was kinda basic alliteration..it was still alliteration lol..


this is something i came up with like 2minutes ago when i was writing..havn't wrote in a while and i wanted to see if i still "had it"

im e-quiped to see shit boy you better believe it
a disturbed flow, thats bound to make you sea sick

6.25/10

I'm 'Charging Over' (Over Charging)Like Stampede On Batteries.
Ya Skank Ass Mom Ain't Like Me Cause I Neva Fancied Her Mammaries.

i bust a clip in everyone shit everyone want me on that remix
grab ya bitch then and go asian wit my chopstick

pssst..im not asia, im jsut bored lol

5.5/10
non-stop freestyles from dawn to sunset
three things in my life I can't get done wit
my pen, my paper, & the piano keys
in hip hop I'm the one like Kiano reevs

6/10

Aim that shit at me, I’ll look straight down the barrel and laugh, you aint man ~ enough
I got my death sorted, suicide and im taking you cowards with me but the plan ~ is ~ rough

6/10

this one is weak,i know,lol

i praise the lord but ride with the devil
i raise my sword,Blood stains and dries on the metal

6/10 just cuz the multies

you weak lames-speak-shady when shit you rap-you-dont-even-do/
all my bars 'raise-heat-daily' like gravitational-pull!/

7/10

There’s to many lives that I touch,
Through the lines that I bust, an this music in which for I lust,
Delivered through this dusty rusted microphone,
That I love just enough,

kinda sick 7/10

Im dark in the mind like my grey matters black
you just like hovertrains man you dont stay on the track-dark minded

8/10

If you're heavy and you know it, don't walk fast
Cause when you're heavy and you show it, your ass claps

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9/10

killing you fags I aint shown you the best
Ill eat ya whole crew and throw up ya set-demon flow

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6/10

I go so crazy on the instrumental
Causing massive damage to your dental
I beat you to your fucking feet kid
Just a product of what the streets did

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6/10

I'm deep~believe~it you can see~I~mean~it
smoke until my lungs are too weak~to~breathe~with
I sit~on~a~slope that's why I slip~and~I~choke
you kids think you're sick when you bit~what~I~wrote..

8/10

I'm Sweet-Wit-The-Bars And Speed-Wit-Ma-Car
Pastchu Suckas Fast I Burn Degrees-On-A-Par..
..With African Summers, So See-What-I-Got
As Ma Ammo And Hammer As I 'BeatBox'-Ya-Block.

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3.9/10 ^Not Really..

Half You Kats Pretence Bout Ya 20 Deep Or Carrying-Out-Calibers
Til U Reach Tha Point Where Ma Mouth Be Narrowing-Ya-Family-First
To Turn Em All Inside Out Through-Paper Or Be It Ma Used-Razor
I Jedi Decapitate Wit Blue-Sabers And Taste Victory Like Food-Savoured

^Hahaha.

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^6/10
I got sick of bein the one ever body misjudge
I got sick of bein' patient to this grudge
that every body bears aginast me I can't stand it
I just demanded respect now I'm damn dead
from the inside & abandoned from the outside
I'm the outline of every pain about life

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^4.9/10..At Best (To Be Honest)....And lol@You Dissing Me. I Wasn't Dissing You, Kid.

I'm Sick Merging-Quick And Murdering-Scripts When I Shit-On-Ya-'Shit'
Laugh At Yer-Pleadin-Tears-Speedin When I Waste A Clip-On-Ya-Bitch
Grab-Ya-By-Tha-Collar-And-Stab-Ya-Wit-A-Proper-Sharpened-Knife
Swing Up A Dagger Into Ya Throat And Then Holler-Atcha-Wife...

Guess Who's Neeext?!?!^

8/10

I never get writers block like you might when you write,
So you other dim wits an dip shits can dip shit in a bucket made for bitches,

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actually I think what you wrote was pretty dope Iphorill,
I just couldn't find any timing or rhythm to it
hear the audio version here (http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.cfm?bandID=599721&songID=4430164) & you'll see that it does have timing & rhythm...
those lines are the last lines of the song btw...

Oh damn trip! my bad... you from England dog? *as prophet runs off to ammend Iphorills score*

^nah...lol is my accent that deceiving?! I'm glad that few can tell that I'm Arabian. yeah I'm from Jordan, an Arabian country in the middle east.

Oh fuck! a terrorist! yo I'm just playin, my three year old is half Arabic
(baby mommas spoiled brat ass is from Jordan 2) ~propz

hahaha wow this thread started turning into a diss thread but whatever

its just so sick when I spit shit you'll spin like a diskette
ya so hard I missed it so shut up ya dipshit-dark minded first line lol

555555555555555555555555/10

I spit lines to attack you and hurt you/
amaze and immerse you/
displace and disperse you/
bitin you like tacks/
whoa, stand back, relax/


Old, old, OLD fucking track.

Damn, not bad yo~8/10

I'm kind-I'm lying-I'm that type of guy that hides behind slime
why? cuz I'm high, blind and bi-ahh nevermind hi guys I'm kai

(just warmin up yall)-ehehehe

^Go Check Into Our Thread Over At The Fields.

Damn, not bad yo~8/10

I'm kind-I'm lying-I'm that type of guy that hides behind slime
why? cuz I'm high, blind and bi-ahh nevermind hi guys I'm kai

(just warmin up yall)-ehehehe

6'2/10

mammal'z eat animal'z insect'z are canible'z red ant'z are flamableand i am too expandable yes im clearly not understandable.

5/10
"Come at me with mics or fists and get slain
If your dad had a brain you'd have been a wank stain"
- new S-10 audio diss

6.5/10
"I'm so desperate that i'm a dyin' breed
I wait for the day where I just die in deed"
-an upcoming song...

^0/10 (can't rate my own bar)
"his face is stiff from ear to ear
he can't scream & even if he could there's no one near to hear
here's a tear comin' it's gonna be his last
he never thought his lifetime would end this fast"
from: "Devil on my bed"

(thought about revivin' this thread)

7/10^

my flows will lock you up, in solitary con-fine-ment, no -time- to- re-pent,
beggin for a red bull, cuz ya sink-in in the o-cean wid ya- feet- in- ce-ment. (1)

1. Red Bull gives you wings