>:/ your obsessed with eminem its known round the nation
your actin like you’ve cum up with a new creation
saying your rapping like eminem its gettin old an it’s causing tension
when you post a thread you start to cause aggravation
You need sum new lyrical inspiration
why don’t you try going to a lyrical invention
or cum to me because ill make you get hot like window condensation
and ill lead you into temptation

with your lame bars an your big head
dissing people you couldn’t diss s**t yes thats what a just sed
when you get murked off you cry to your mummy
your always thinking of a devious plan to get back your dummy
an yes am a girl an what you going to do
ill leave you trembling on the floor an stuck to it like glue

you giving up is a good decision
Other wise you’ll get murked off and left in submission
you cant battle for your life so getting rid of you is my mission
your going to be left with concussion end of discussion





a just fought ov dis qwik tym coz ave seen im goin on sik at ppl n it does ma ed in n a now ya gunna cum bak wid oo im a girl n a cant rap or battle or n e fink but bring it on coz atleast i can admit to hat i am ure just a low life that need 2 qwit b4 ppl just laf at u even more so bring on the ure a slag stuff coz i int boverd bring it boi am w8in!!!!!

y dunt ppl stop viewing n start to give feed?

i have no idea what to say lol

all im gonna say is lol

It was good, the fact is you could of opened a post with nothing in it an still dissed him just as much, but anyways, lol.

herb rivalry is so fucking retarded

I actually feel sorry for her cause gladbag is a lot better.

i have no idea what to say lol

Word.

shits wack, big words dont make you good. try usin multiple syllable rhymes and start makin your lines match up better.

thank you for the feed back and for the guy that said gladbag is alot better well thats stuff i wrote isnt even half of what i can do so how do you know that? thats all i've got to say on the matter

lol...see..you definitely didnt bite this...because it's hideously whack.

ok den
gladbag What r u a fukin transvestite
My barz are so tight they’ve got u lukin 4 a fight
Ure getting scared ov the night uve started using a night light
This isn’t no competition Bcoz really I have no opposition
Ure bein slewed in every nown position So just sit down shut up n listen
Every bar u spit is just shit whilst mine r powerfull wen dey hit
Wen u get murked u fall n have a fit coz ure shit n u no it
I think u need to fink b4 u step to sum1 rava dan goin on bout ure imaginary gun
Im gonna murk u off just 4 pure fun coz ure lyrics r shit n so r u son

Ill cut ya throat den watch as blood pours out like yolk
my flow is makin ya choke coz ure just a joke
U got a betta chance ov livin if u did 20grams ov coke
im ruthless wit my attacc always goin full blast a dunt hold bacc
Were as u fink ya sik u must be on smack ure barz r just wack
Wen am murkin a dunt miss gladbag ure wack n so is ya diss
Wen u hear a snake hiss in ya pants u have a piss

give it to me straigth aint no chasin it
you need to check in the mirror aint no facin it !
cause you playin the role n' you plannin to fold
i am the master Mc, i got the world on hold !
i'm all over the streets like yur favorite sneaker
breakin up yur sound like a drive through speaker!
everything that i be spittin iz strong
i kno you wish you were me
you wish u culd think of these rhymes im a devil, rockin to different levels
I hover among hot tunes to instrumentals you have one liners i have several !

galdbag u rap? funny is that a joke! you aint worthy of bein my secretary man thats a quote
Your barz r old n stink just like tuna fish, im like ludicrous ure cryin as im doin' this
U did that murk dunt u fink its incomplete u no im ryt so ya starting to sink and weep running home claiming u 4got to put down the toilet seat
ill bump into u in the back street listenin to ma murk sayin that's neat! I int even started at the moment ure onli half beat
U no ma cru r like ninja turtles everytym u mc ure jumpin' hurdles ull b betta off flippin' gerbils
U cnt mc u best listen to that or ill put a stick in your back n den ill hit you so fast
So You better think twice if I Pull A Knife when I’m Full of Strife
You’re verses are only mega cus’ they’re Full Of Bytes

what bout that one feed plz

I didn't read all of the last thing you wrote, but gladbag sucks, hell personally how can he be better than anyone, we he don't make no god damn sense, well anyways, keep writing

EASY ACE your girl got sleazy lace make the panties
Drop when the candies hot oh damn best you hire nannies
To baby sit while your lady git with me, you’re fake and dense
if you say I don’t make sense even the apes are convince
That you write random quotes and should abandon hopes
of becoming a rapper you’re only stumbling through chapters
pages stuck together, best duck be clever your rhymes are laughters

^Dope. Very dope.