Rhyming Like EMINEM (SLIM SHADY)

Look I sit astride a horse with a ride choice, pride in my voice
Don’t know whether to gitty up or be a sitting duck no remorse
Want to win money in the damn casino but Gambino cheats
A lot, tote a sweet glock cocked to shoot street jocks and freaks
Its rotten apparel at the bottom of the barrel stands at doors
With plan that soars plotting songs like Christmas carols galore
Hell I’m not Santa Claus went to Atlanta with flaws talked
To Jermaine Dupri a true G but wouldn’t hire me got caught
Up in the sick politics of rap had affairs in court so I went
To the airport boarded a flight to DRE now I’m tight today bent
In the AFTERMATH and not a disaster path nowadays rappers
Act like they got something to say I almost forgot about the DRE chapters
You can only rate this sick like an escaped convict a fugitive in rap
That can’t be trapped not even Tommy lee Jones want to chase this crap

elevate a lot and stop with the rapping like eminem thing man you ddont and never will

Shit Was Right On The Money For Real Tell Me Why Not

Shit Was Right On The Money For Real Tell Me Why Not


cause dawg ya lines make absolutely no fucking sense you just need to make more sense when you rhyme and then you'll be better get a topic use wordplay the second part started to make sense though so I give you somthing for that man

SO WHAT YOU DON'T UNDERSTAND?

Look I sit astride a horse (HE'S SITTIN GON A HORSE) with a ride choice, pride in my voice
Don’t know whether to gitty up(THIS IS WHAT YOU TELL A HORSE WHEN YOU'RE READY TO RIDE) or be a sitting duck no remorse (YOU CAN BE SHOT AT CATS GOT NO REMORSE)

dogg diatribe is like the top rapper on this site listen to him fool^^

naw he don't know all th eslang know so he can't be top rapper he has no knowledge of Ebonics this whole post made sense right here from the rap perspective

he's right
your work makes no sense. Maybe a couple words or lines make sense together, but the piece as a whole has no consistancy of topic. Right now all we know is that you can find a bunch of words that rhyme...you need to lace that into a rhyme with an actual topic, because right now you're focusing more on multies than actual content, and content is number one imo

Please stop posting..

darkness what's your problem how is me posting hurting your whack ass ?

Please stop posting..

lmfao

Cats Iaq Too Low To Comprehend Now I Understand The Term Free Schools And Still Dumb Folks That Was Directed At Some Of These Dudes Up In Here Ha! Ha! Ha!

LMAO

That was so retarded it was funny..A friendly tip, dont attempt to diss people..It doesnt work