Got details galore like a retail store the prices boom for
The nicest tunes so talk abuzz even stalk the fuzz so bazaar
Peace extreme the police on the scene light flashing on car
Hear the sound of handcuffs now my plan scuffed can’t prevail
In jail hey somebody pay the bail understand this stuff is stale
Like mountain climbers stand on cliffs an let my plans drift
Into an abyss with menu bliss of four thousand feet deep swift
Ready to ski a slope and see a dope snowfall with a peek whiff
Of the winter wind, then have dinner in a cabin be good vibrations
My time is shorter and rhymes in order use word abbreviations
And unheard of creations and like Thomas Edison see a nation
In turmoil, my gift is raw but ready to withdraw from rap
Some dumb crap never gets credit for my verse damn slum crap
This full plain art seem to pull brains apart let the game start
Ready to aim darts at head and the fat red lips on a dame’s heart
There’s no limit here it like and academic year when school opens
In September even fools smoking will remember to be cool hoping
To pass exams and duck class scams get knowledge be glad and educated
Go for a diploma oh you graduated then all your friends be sad and devastated
Like an engineer when in fear elevates brains plus accelerates trains
When I turn on powers and burns towers then celebrate at games

Hear the sound of handcuffs now my plan buffed can’t prevail


why do you even try with nonsense like this in your raps...your user title says it all...

to be honest im not one to hate..but dam you suck

Eleven 24 naw son this is corrected now what? give me an Amen

Hear the sound of handcuffs now my plan scuffed can’t prevail
In jail hey somebody pay the bail understand this stuff is stale

aight..well when it said buffed it didnt make sense ..scuffed..il give you

Makes more sense than some of your other drops..Kinda...

starting to feel your stuff a lot more man..keep working at it

one thing though i feel you need to try and stick to the one topic instead of drifting off on to other things that have nothing to do with the drop

and have you ever thought about doing audio's?

He's like a textcee with ADD.

I crush skulls, bring down seagulls...OOH! Tits!

work on staying on track man
looks like you're just finding a lot of random words, then placing filler in between and the rhyme aint goin nowhere...actually its going everywhere, at once. Try to keep to a topic...not 100% necessarily but at least moreso