yeah its been a while since i've dropped anything here..or even been on this site...so i thought while i was visiting i should drop something



i shouldn't have to highlight multies and wordplay etc...






My minds filled with rhyme skill and I know that you know this
I spit lines ill till your spines spilled bro havn’t you noticed
There aint no bigger threat, the best in rap havn’t they figured yet
No questions asked I can make you choke like the first toke of that cigarette
I could type all night, but its pointless they bite in spite, boy write your own
You might be tight but no matter what site your on I put the mike in microphone
I write at night cause I like it dark, rap sneaks into your soul and pulls your life apart
i type from heart, like spandex on Mcmanus im too tight for charts
you might be smart, and if you are get out of this game now before it gets to far
and your in too deep acting like alchaholics the way you never miss a bar
I don’t mean to depress I know it seems that I stress about rap too much
But im addicted to dope lines, a fiend in a mess my pens glad to touch
The paper, when it knows its in my hands cause its gon create a miracle
There plans for my flows and flows in my plans, I hate being so lyrical
But its all I got…
..except from lager some food and the idiot box (haha)



short and sweet...


-pz-



feed = rep + 10emoney

I thought it was good, I liked the irony in some of your lines, good rhyme.

10emoney= lmfao

Nice, definite elevation, some nice multies and your punches are getting a little better.

Fuck in depth feed back, it's 5.45AM, man.

damn^^^


well im tired right now (just woke up) but with what i read it seemed like youve gotten better

thanks for the feed, especially carnage..have to spread rep before givin it to carnage and legend again

Do You Want To Collab, My Ex-Internet Enemy? LMFAO

lol wtf^^ ... do i even know you??

it was decent ryhmes were simple though..Keep elevating.Yhis is definitly better than the last shit i read of yours


Return the favor of giving feed..This forum is dead..

rhymes were simple??..what do you mean by that??

far, bar
miracle,lyrical
touch, much

but they were used in multies^^..dont matter

im guessin your trying to say i should use "bigger" words..like immortal technique etc all do...well that aint my style...

1. too many "big" words can fuck up your flow..as immortal technique and some others have proven time and time again.

2. you dont need to use big words to be a good rapper like some people might think.

3. big words dosn't make your raps more complex..so theres no point in it

4. if i used big words my shit would look like a spawn of gladbag

5. it just aint how i write...



thanks for the feed tho..il give you rep..if possible

lol wtf^^ ... do i even know you??
Yes, We Spent Our Night Together. It Was Wonderful. :D I'm SHOCKED You Don't Remember Me!!:mad:

lmao^^ wtf

its ''the man of a million names'' man^

it had every cat but since it wasnt audio I guesss the flow doesnt matter but you should just shorten ya lines so it flows better

its ''the man of a million names'' man^

oh yeah lol



props for the feed diatribe

4. if i used big words my shit would look like a spawn of gladbag


LMAO^^