This is a start to a new song, check it out

[Verse 1:]
The voices of my inner demons play like symphonies,
That seamlessly seem to take over my mind with ease,
Till I become social suicide like a demonic disease,
Wit satanic lyrics an keys, trapped in a puzzle of mystery till I’m deceased,
An let free from my misery, Trust me there ain’t no miracles in this story,
Just ill lyrical skills of expertise, that even victimize lines,
Of dark designs, in my mind of chaos that’s undefined at this time,
An age of darkness an rhymes, that creep up like vines on you with out warning signs,
I just start rapping, snap, an it just happens, there ain’t no prevention,
Or stop to this sick an twisted perception,
Of visions an images I spew to you through deception,
Make no exception, I’m immaculate an manipulative in my intention,

[Chorus:]
Cuz these demons I hear them screaming,
These demons I can feel them scheming,
An these demons I now they prevent me from dreaming,
An these demons there taunting me
An these demons there haunting me,
Please someone help this waste of a teen, trapped as an mc,

Feeds plz

Is the verse that bad I can even get any feed? Damn

its been like what 8 hours??? anyways good job on this

wanna collab? ive writtin a verse on this exact same topic

I would, but I'm doing some shit with this verse wit some friends, maybe on a different topic or verse sure, I guess we'll see, thnx for the feeds, uppin

lol he means just put your 2 verses together that youve already made^^

I know what he means, but I'd rather not do that with this verse at this time or anything. So yeah, looking for more feeds

it was decent, i have a lot of songs with the same kinda style..It wasnt bad

cool, thnx for the feeds, uppin