View Full Version : Advice 'bout this shit


DTMafia
04-12-2006, 10:53 PM
Game was right, Gunit lost out,
Games shits tight, and theres no doubt,
50, Banks, Yayo, and Olivia all got skills,
But they just cant compare,
Its Game whos makin the bills,
300 Bars fucked up there unit,
Listen to the shit he spits,
Just sit down and admit,
Raps done with gunit,
Why dont you just quit?
Im not tryin' to make enemies,
But im also not gonna plea,
You dont sign our shit,
We go to Game, he makes it legit,
Maybe this is to hard for you to transpit,
Ill say it once for all ya to hear,
50 Cents a bitch,
Youll be forgoten about by next year,
The rap game needs a switch,
I aint no gangsta but that doesnt mean i dont traffic,
Say shit 'bout us and it might get graphic,
Eminem why'd you bring these bitches into this game?
50 Didnt need the fame,
You've seen his movie, he had cash.




^^^How is that? Be constructive if ur gonna hate on it, but be honest.

DTMafia
04-13-2006, 09:48 AM
feedback??

Tehgame
04-13-2006, 11:12 AM
Seems like what i did, Multies, vocab and flow needs work :/ but thats a new guys opinnion.

Darkness
04-13-2006, 01:44 PM
i like it just because you talk shit about g unit, 50 cent is a bitch

~lil Matthew~
04-13-2006, 07:50 PM
It sucks.

Darkness
04-14-2006, 01:53 AM
haha...