SUICIDAL MOMENTS


wrote the other night when i was on the edge

spoken: yo what happens when your just push to the limit so much
you have suicidal thoughts and thoughts turn into reality!


We’ve all had them and there ripping me apart
This worlds too much for me to take, time to depart
And it’s like it’s got me but throat, im strangling
And I feel like im about to be hung, im dangling
What the fuck am I suppose to do
Its like gods picked me out and said im through with you
But he’s to lazy to do it so he’s pushing me to the limit
And im wondering if I got the balls to commit it
Am I a man? But I man doesn’t take his own life
Even after all the stress and the strive
And im a fuckin hypocrite
Telling others not to do it and talking shit
But im not dead.
Even after putting a gun to my head
And I got slits from my wrist to the top of my arm
This periods nearly over, ride the storm out and stay calm
Im pretty sure this is it, this is my last rap
Feel free to call me a bitch if I don’t come back
Cause that’s all that I am
Saying im gonna do it and not going through with my plan
So from me it’s good night
Don’t forget me and have a good life.




lol i guess im a bitch


uppin for feed back

did i do good multiez??

i liked it just because i like the topic and know how that shit is but it wasnt anything special, best thing about was the realism of it 6/10

i liked it just because i like the topic and know how that shit is but it wasnt anything special, best thing about was the realism of it 6/10


thanks for the feed back dude

uppin

the concept and delivery was good

keep it up !

not that bad. needs some flow. 6/10