rules;
4 bars, 8 lines.
No hate/dickriding votes
first to two votes wins.

let me see..........where did this beef begin?/
I know this dude tried to snitch me out ........for voting for him/
yo, this cat mad...........cause of a vote/
So I'm a have to rip him off something proper....... till he broke/
how you claim to be a gunslinger on the net?..........that must be a joke/
I'm so far ahead of you cats........... Nostradamus couldn't see me in any of his prophecies/
see how I be droppin these..........rhymes atomically/
I know I'm making this kid go crazy.........he needs a lobotomy/

let me see..........where did this beef begin?/
I know this dude tried to snitch me out ........for voting for him/
yo, this cat mad...........cause of a vote/
So I'm a have to rip him off something proper....... till he broke/
how you claim to be a gunslinger on the net?..........that must be a joke/
I'm so far ahead of you cats........... Nostradamus couldn't see me in any of his prophecies/
see how I be droppin these..........rhymes atomically/
I know I'm making this kid go crazy.........he needs a lobotomy/

Its not a "try" when you "succeed", Ares, your fourteen quit Tryn to Cheat
Your "lying to me" if you say-shit like its pay~sh1ntz My Rhymes Beat

just sit back and relax im not mad i just wana ask "why would i believe.."
These people should know your votes are exposed "..lies from a theif."

Trying to steel awin so you can feel big ? whats the deal-with-it?
Your wanna-be prophecies obviously gotta be un-real-list-ic.

Im just gettin real with it how would you feel if it was you that lost
cause some dude come across with a vote and lied his ass off

uppin for votes

oops didnt mean to post her elol

Ares - Flow
Gunslinger - mutlies
Ares structure
Ares - vocab.


Sorry gunz

But that was a bitch move ares when you asked for people to vote for you.

Go for a round 2 :)

Ares - Flow
Gunslinger - mutlies
Ares structure
Ares - vocab.


Sorry gunz

But that was a bitch move ares when you asked for people to vote for you.

Go for a round 2 :)

dude i think you have the names backwards

opener: GUN
areas starts telling a "once a upon a time" story while gun comes into the match swinging

Vocab: GUN
Ares shit is so simple and basic but out of nowhere cmoes this nastrodomus prophecies atomically line as if it was his own idea... dude u forgot socrates!!, that shit is so played out.... then gun punches him in the head letting him know that his "wanna-b prophecies obviously gotta be unrealistic".
asside from all that they were both about equal

Struct: GUN
ares that had to be the worst struc i ever seen, was the ......'s suposed to fool me into thinking all the lines were the same size???
gun had grounded structure

Flow: GUN
ares...............flow.......sucked.....what.....is.......this? how do u "flow" that? do u just pause during the silent "......"'s until you land on the right beat?? ROFL
gun had decent flow

multies:GUN
ares does not appear to have the mental capacity to rhyme beyond one syllable (unless its a borrowed idea) in this drop

creativity: i dont know both sides seemed to just convey a message, up until ares thought he was nastrodameus n shit...

Enjoyment: GUN
can't say i enjoy........reading ares shit.......possibly ever. (this cat could be retarded in real life)
gun's shit was enjoyable to read and it was straightforward and to the point and he just expressed how he felt, and he did it with multies and flow

OVERALL: GUNSLINGER

tehgame u must be smoking crack or riding some hard dick or just simply fuked up the names, if its the latter then i apologize for derepping u

Ares - Flow
Gunslinger - mutlies
Ares structure
Ares - vocab.


Sorry gunz

But that was a bitch move ares when you asked for people to vote for you.

Go for a round 2 :)



opposite of what he said

vote goes to gunslinger easily

Ares - Flow
Gunslinger - mutlies
Ares structure
Ares - vocab.


Sorry gunz

But that was a bitch move ares when you asked for people to vote for you.

Go for a round 2 :)

lol,I didn't ask for anyone to vote for me. He sent me a pm asking to vote on a battle he was on, the I voted for him because I thought the other dudes punchlines were lame (calling gunz white and acting on a Eminem board.) Then he goes in one of my battles and goes look everyone here'a pm I got which is me thanking him for voting on the battle. Basically he's bitching over nothing.

That brings the total to Ares 1 (which has to be a typoe)

and Gun 2

imhop

rules;
4 bars, 8 lines.
No hate/dickriding votes
first to two votes wins.


actually, thats game. it was 2 votes for a win

Yeah I couldnt vote, but ya both are getting better, keep elevating kids Peace, 749

dude i think you have the names backwards

opener: GUN
areas starts telling a "once a upon a time" story while gun comes into the match swinging

Vocab: GUN
Ares shit is so simple and basic but out of nowhere cmoes this nastrodomus prophecies atomically line as if it was his own idea... dude u forgot socrates!!, that shit is so played out.... then gun punches him in the head letting him know that his "wanna-b prophecies obviously gotta be unrealistic".
asside from all that they were both about equal

Struct: GUN
ares that had to be the worst struc i ever seen, was the ......'s suposed to fool me into thinking all the lines were the same size???
gun had grounded structure

Flow: GUN
ares...............flow.......sucked.....what.....is.......this? how do u "flow" that? do u just pause during the silent "......"'s until you land on the right beat?? ROFL
gun had decent flow

multies:GUN
ares does not appear to have the mental capacity to rhyme beyond one syllable (unless its a borrowed idea) in this drop

creativity: i dont know both sides seemed to just convey a message, up until ares thought he was nastrodameus n shit...

Enjoyment: GUN
can't say i enjoy........reading ares shit.......possibly ever. (this cat could be retarded in real life)
gun's shit was enjoyable to read and it was straightforward and to the point and he just expressed how he felt, and he did it with multies and flow

OVERALL: GUNSLINGER

tehgame u must be smoking crack or riding some hard dick or just simply fuked up the names, if its the latter then i apologize for derepping u

Okay, first off I was high when I wrote my verse, and I usually don't write my bars like that, I just thought I'd try something else.Second off all your an idiot if anything the one thing I know I had him on was vocab. The fucking biggest word he used was unrealistic and when I used lobotomy.But fine a lose is a lose. ANd yo
wtf is with calling me retarded (that a fucking challenge or something?).

Stop making excues's ares

Hmm now that i look more into depth( i did that analysis quickly) gun won hands down lol.

Stop making excues's ares

Hmm now that i look more into depth( i did that analysis quickly) gun won hands down lol.

ummmm..........wtf changing your vote right now. Too bad your last vote counts, 2-1.Gun won.topic. closed. And I'm not making excuses this wasn't my best effort.

Compare my last battle verse to this. Yeah, you see a differnce don't you dumbass.


Yo,on the mic I'm a savage/
cause I'm a Foxx when I Cruise and cause Collateral Damage/
dogg your shit was more of the lame, same shit/
you lost the last battle and now you trying to hop all over my dick/
I don't need Chupelo on a one on one scrap/
but if need be, I'm sure homie's got my back/
cause he also thinks your wack/
Ovadose sounds like an emo ass name/
I'm a put you out like Chupelo did the flame/
you won't be dropping bombs but you'll be hiding in a hole like saddam hussein/
so go ahead and cut your veins/
don't be mad at me that you never got some brains/
my rhymes is so off the wall, they have to keep me in chains/
you say you gonna bury me? huh.....that's a laugh/
whatver you on homie, drop that shit and stick to some grass/
so calm down and go back to workin at Micky D's/
Cause we both know you and Spooky's rhymes are both cheese/

well gg anyway