aight 4-6 barz

no dick r, feedin off verses, hate, bullshit votes
no recyclin!
etc.

24 hours to check in, 24 hours to spit

check..

im recklace at this text shit yall better repect it
dont complain hate if people dont vote for your wack spit
disect ya neck just ta check how ya doin on ya flow
ya must have asthma they way you speach seams to slow
i sit here and type this text tightly victory in site for thy
id like to meet ya ghostwriter so i can tell him to BITE ME
u cant rid of me u aint thug and i dont care w hat u say u did
i accepted this battle to ask "hows ya wife? and my kids? (lol childish)
if u beat me HA mayne its only luck dude
have all oof e web yellin FUCK YOU (ha ha)



well quick freestyle...

aight

yo

Despite ya name have ya flee the place like ya got cold feet wit aint-one-doubt
But ill find ya,light my buthole like a cigarrete,fart n watch the flame-come-out/1
He use his mouth as a prattlin tool- his shit got no point like a beat witout bass-n-rhythm
Id say hez a "text battlin-fool",but he said it himself,he gets turned on wit lyrical masochism/2
I gotta clog my nose,yo spitz stinkier than my sockz befo they're in the washin-machine
Mockin-a-G wit a water gun is enough to get flame to squashin-tha-beef/3
Dis dude grabs a "bite to eat" in battles,have em runnin to the toilet in minutes
Cuz ive put a laxitive in dis one ta make em shit out all the bitten lyrics/4

1.get cold feet meanz ta get scared n turn back
when u "light" a fart there's a flame like commin out your ass
get it
2.Think u get dis one but in case
masochism is taste for sufferin, doin yourself harm
look below his nick, it says "text battlin fool"
n besides he disses himself in his battles talkin sumthin bout him havin aids and hiv
3.Flame,fire,water gun...
4.heard dat he bites
http://www.eminemweb.com/board/showthread.php?t=23959
usin "bite to eat" as a metaphore
i mean bite lines, eat em
laxitive causes takin a shit
i mean that he might bite my shit n i put a laxative in my line in case(it causes diarrhea)

No offence, pure battle

Good battle dogg

uppin for votes

Uppin

aiight

worplay....punch
vocab...punch
Readable....flame
flow......flame...
PUNCHEs.......punch


all in all this really wasn't that bad i'll qoute the best lines


Punch

Despite ya name have ya flee the place like ya got cold feet wit aint-one-doubt
But ill find ya,light my buthole like a cigarrete,fart n watch the flame-come-out/1

^^^hot personal

FLame

i sit here and type this text tightly victory in site for thy
id like to meet ya ghostwriter so i can tell him to BITE ME

lol nice conept and punch

all in all...punch just came with alil more......more thought up....flame good job but you need to work on creativity.....like thatline for every one of them....

Vote....PUNCHA

aight thanks for votin bless(You jus got repped for not bein a lasybone).You forgot to include multies tho

1:0

uppin

uppin

u up to much...

datz cuz im sick of these lasy people viewin the thread n not votin

u had no rep yeesterday..and now u have 7..damn just noticed tat..

uppin

multiez-punch
personals-punch
punches-punch
creativity-punch
structure-punch
n-joyment-punch

flame u aint com hard @ all loox lik u aint even try
overall-punch

^^^exactly what he said but i think flame had better structure, it was easier to read

vote.....donkey puncha,lol

good battle punch, flame you gotta bring more than that man but good battle

u cant vote..its hate ^^^ ut tom AKA decipher u cant vote

its not a hate vote, but if you dont want it to count thats cool with me

well uve been beefin wit me awhile..

^ you see im not beefin, just messin around but if you dont want my vote to count its cool, dont worry about it

peace

wordplay: puncha
multies: puncha
flow: flame
metaphors: none
vocab: puncha

overall: puncha

this was a pretty close battle but puncha had better multies and vocab. I liked that bite me line by flame that was good but i think puncha took this.

lol,..a NOOB voting?^ Is it allowed??? Hahahhahaaaaa