Aight rules are as follows
1. 8-16 bars
2. No hate/ dick riding votes
3. Drop at least 24 Hours after I drop
4. No Biting
5. No Freeposting, take care of your business elsewhere

alright im checkin in here and droppin

Yo, yo, my freestyles they make you cry
Fuck, forget this I got bigger fishes to fry/
I’ll put a blunt in ur casket, lost in the game
Should I kill chupelo too? or let him cope with the pain/
Trying to kill me, putting bullets in my head
That’s why you can’t kill me, nigga im already dead/
In fact I never gonna die, ive never heard of death
Energy can never be destroyed only the flesh. /
Don’t give me no lip, don’t give me no muthafukin back talk
Don’t make me get my gun and blow your fukin head off/
So don’t try me, you better walk by me
Or I’ll do you like the first part of menace to society/
Im fukin insane
Dropping bombs blowing things up like saddam Hussein /
I don’t give a fuck about no one
You and chupelo take your shit and run/
Hold up I aint done
Im just getting started this shits fun/
You can’t talk shit no more saying you DUGG my verse
Well you DUGG your own grave, they call that curse/
Rest in peace……….? Nop I hope you burn in hell
You beat me in a double but your the one who fell/
Well ima finish this off
I hope it wasn’t to hard for you, cause I know that your soft/
You won the battle but look I won the war
Scream out OvaDoSeS name, cause this shit is RAW!!!/



aiight you gotta 24 hours to drop ares then votes please

Yo, yo, my freestyles they make you cry
Fuck, forget this I got bigger fishes to fry/
I’ll put a blunt in ur casket, lost in the game
Should I kill chupelo too? or let him cope with the pain/
Trying to kill me, putting bullets in my head
That’s why you can’t kill me, nigga im already dead/
In fact I never gonna die, ive never heard of death
Energy can never be destroyed only the flesh. /
Don’t give me no lip, don’t give me no muthafukin back talk
Don’t make me get my gun and blow your fukin head off/
So don’t try me, you better walk by me
Or I’ll do you like the first part of menace to society/
Im fukin insane
Dropping bombs blowing things up like saddam Hussein /
I don’t give a fuck about no one
You and chupelo take your shit and run/
Hold up I aint done
Im just getting started this shits fun/
You can’t talk shit no more saying you DUGG my verse
Well you DUGG your own grave, they call that curse/
Rest in peace……….? Nop I hope you burn in hell
You beat me in a double but your the one who fell/
Well ima finish this off
I hope it wasn’t to hard for you, cause I know that your soft/
You won the battle but look I won the war
Scream out OvaDoSeS name, cause this shit is RAW!!!/



aiight you gotta 24 hours to drop ares then votes please


ummmmmmmm......ok.

Yo,on the mic I'm a savage/
cause I'm a Foxx when I Cruise and cause Collateral Damage/
dogg your shit was more of the lame, same shit/
you lost the last battle and now you trying to hop all over my dick/
I don't need Chupelo on a one on one scrap/
but if need be, I'm sure homie's got my back/
cause he also thinks your wack/
Ovadose sounds like an emo ass name/
I'm a put you out like Chupelo did the flame/
you won't be dropping bombs but you'll be hiding in a hole like saddam hussein/
so go ahead and cut your veins/
don't be mad at me that you never got some brains/
my rhymes is so off the wall, they have to keep me in chains/
you say you gonna bury me? huh.....that's a laugh/
whatver you on homie, drop that shit and stick to some grass/
so calm down and go back to workin at Micky D's/
Cause we both know you and Spooky's rhymes are both cheese/

I'm not used to writing that much, but whatever. Let the best man win.

lol not really the best i have ever seen but here we go

Punches.........Ares
multis.......Ares
flow.......Dose
Vocab..........ares
Wordplay......Niether
Complexity........Nither

Overall.....

Ares........you had aiight flow some good concepts but not really wowwin anyone with punches........pick it up homie.....

Dose......nothing special in any way from you....learn about multis and punches and fix structure to read and flow good and you will elevate....

Summary...the one with punches wins...simple......VOTE ARES


onezx

i like dose's better. but both need work

1st off....I won't include some cats 'cause u 2 didn't do anything in that cat....so,it goes like

Punches-Ares (Although,both were weak as fuck,..I felt his)
Flow-None
Similies/Meta's-Ares

Over-All=Ares

That's it wit the cats,....but wait,...

That’s why you can’t kill me, nigga im already dead/
lol,...u just basically dissed yerself here^

In fact I never gonna die, ive never heard of death
1st u say yer dead and then u say u've never heard of death and u can't be killed??? Hmm,...?

you won't be dropping bombs but you'll be hiding in a hole like saddam hussein/
Quit feeding off of ovadose's saddam concept....make up yer own...

That's it,...u both are wack and need to elevate a hella lot more....

pZ>-

Thank you all for voting. Score; Ares-2,Ovadose-1.

thanks ChriS ViciouS for the feedback uppin for votes people