Sayin' I Aint On Ya Level
Nigga You A Novice
I Aint Even Tryina' Brawl
Just Bring Knowledge
But If You Say Shit Like This
That'll Make Me Get Violent
So Get The Fuck Out My Grill,man,
I Raelly Advise It
Talkin' Bout Ya'll Niggas All Got Alotta Guns,man,
I'll Smack You Cross The Head Witta Fuckin Knot Of Ones
If You Meet Me
Be Happy Tha Cha' Livin'
Cause' I Got Them Diomonds That'll Hurt Ya Vision
I'll Drop Ya Bones Cause Imma Thug N Harmony
Niggaz Can Quit Butcha' Bitch
Cant Get Up Offa' Me
Nigga I Got A Gloc.
And If You Dont Back Down
Imma' Make Ya Body Rock
Layin' The Gat Down

that shit barley ryhmes....All that fake gangsta shit is played out too

There was nothin' tough in there

this is for<<<<<tom>>>>>>
fuck you bitch
suck my mutha fuckin dick, bitch
i fucked yo mamma
ya girl
she a mutha fuckin ho ass hooker
so is all yo other family
bitch
bitch
bitch
that is hatin now mutha fucka
you aint even have to go that far with your lil hatin ass mutha fuckin
dick grabbin cock ridin'
no talent havin bitch ass mutha fuckin
hump ass nigga
you got ass fucked by a nigga named tank
in prison dick suckin cock ridin
no pussy gettin
you get that dope head pussy
you had sex with elton john
mutha fuckin ass bitch
yo mammas a damn prostitute
so is yo daddy mutha fucka
yo family on welfare yo daddy left yo family
you aint like that you probably like dike jones
you ho ass nigga
you still aint get no pussy
yo mamma gave me a free run bitch
you found yo computer in the mutha fuckin dumpster
bitch ass ho ass nigga
i bet yor computer pink
you lil pussy
you dont get pussy
you is a pussy
ho ass mutha fucka
you sucked yo daddies homeless dick
ass face bitch

chris visious or wha eva
i know you liked the diss to 50
i aint hatin
just tell me what was wrong with it
fa sho thanks

ok dude that makes no sense, has no flow, and has kindergarten vocab, im sorry but seriously man stop takin' up lines with "muthafuckin' huimp ass niggering fucker motherfuckin fucker"
thats bullshit
and what the fuck is hump ass nigger fuck fuck no fuck fuck u pussy fuckin fucker fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck, all you say is fuck

closest thing to tough/hard rhymes in there was



I'll Drop Ya Bones Cause Imma Thug N Harmony




things to work on, multies,vocab,flow, and ideas..concepts etc..try to think up some more shit

-pz-1-

this is for<<<<<tom>>>>>>
fuck you bitch
suck my mutha fuckin dick, bitch
i fucked yo mamma
ya girl
she a mutha fuckin ho ass hooker
so is all yo other family
bitch
bitch
bitch
that is hatin now mutha fucka
you aint even have to go that far with your lil hatin ass mutha fuckin
dick grabbin cock ridin'
no talent havin bitch ass mutha fuckin
hump ass nigga
you got ass fucked by a nigga named tank
in prison dick suckin cock ridin
no pussy gettin
you get that dope head pussy
you had sex with elton john
mutha fuckin ass bitch
yo mammas a damn prostitute
so is yo daddy mutha fucka
yo family on welfare yo daddy left yo family
you aint like that you probably like dike jones
you ho ass nigga
you still aint get no pussy
yo mamma gave me a free run bitch
you found yo computer in the mutha fuckin dumpster
bitch ass ho ass nigga
i bet yor computer pink
you lil pussy
you dont get pussy
you is a pussy
ho ass mutha fucka
you sucked yo daddies homeless dick
ass face bitch

lmao.. you fuckin suck...seriously

thats not a rap but if you hate nelly why are you rapping about grills can you help me im confused. and i hope you were joking with the one you did with tom

Rap isn't about saying "nigga, bitch ass, hoe mothafucka, nigga, ass, dick, suck my dick, ass, bitch ass nigga, fuck, fuck, fuck, shit, nigga." Get your priorities right, and treat Rap as you would treat anything else, with respect.

actually my best advise...Drop rap from ya daily agenda and long term dreams cause it won't happen.....ONEZZZZZZZZZ

Everyone shut up. Except Carnage. Nelly, you suck more dicks than a slut, so shut your trap.