aight yo' chek it out

5-8 bars,
first to 3 votes!
im givin 48 hours after sign in cuase i gotta work tho hommie

sign in dog!

Sorry i couldnt get on for a wihle, i accept the battle dude!
word.

Don't you dare step to this you can't compare i am the man
Blare my music that im usin aint no loosin from land to land//
i am the man with the plan that nobody can demand
got lollypops for your moms thats why im the Candyman!//
to my best recolection im hardcore representin'
i got these thoughts wrestling like your flows no direction//
my weapons are detecting an enemy insurrection
fell hard once but i come back like ressurections//
got these dope treats for your beats now move your feet to the beet
your mom dropped down to me with speed like she had some greese in her knees!//
im thinking that your rhymes be stinking like you are releasing the cheese
wash your ass and take a bath im to fresh like a new breeze in the trees//

how about that ;P

let me see what ya got paysh1ntz, lol

were you at paysh1ntz

dude chil out i said i wud post,
ayight, check it:

im paysh1ntz layin spits and sprayin nigs u best be prayin bitch
i got no patience for your lameness everybodys praisin this//

'gunslinga' wen you rap it smells bad like i had let 'one linga'
you need to be on springa' beat your ass puttin you through the ringa'//

no effort whatsoever but my rhyme skill is still immeasurable
fukin with me u beter remember to pay your life insurance bill//

gunslinger your white i dont like u just like i was lauren hill
u act black wen u rap i gat ur ass the cops got a warrant still//

im sickly like mickey and mallory cant ya see i was born to kill
i got mad whores galore cuz all these bitches b adorin ma skill//

These peeps come to see a contest but be honest your borin the thrill
but everyone can see clearly that my rhyme scheme is more than ill//

lol good luck dude, uppin for votes yo'!!

damn that was pretty good, i really didnt have time to work on mine :(

is anyone guna vote? cmon

Stucture/flow- I'm gonna gives this to Gunslinger. His seems more organized.

Dissing-Paysh1ntz called gunslinger white and says says he's acting black on a fucking Eminem board! Do you know how stupid that looked? But Gunslinger barely dissed you and when he did all he said is your rhymes stink. This is a Tie,it's equally bad.

Vocab- Gunslinger. Other dude says he didn't put in any effort and I beleive him, those lines were just basic as can be.


yeah I don't feel like getting into more detail but both of you cats need more work on your rhymes.My votes goes to Gunslinger cause a) other dude dissing cause he white on a Eminem board, wtf? b) I liked his rhymes better cause they had some effort c)Paysh1ntz, said himself he put no effort

I was asked to vote on this and I don't do the whole categories thing so my vote might not count. But Paysh1ntz had better flow, actually had some multies. and I kinda liked the immeasurable/ insurance bill line even though it doesn't rhyme perfectly. So vote = Paysh1ntz

vote for paysh1ntZ

disses seemed beter and i felt the flow

flow: pay
multies: pay
metaphors: pay
punches: gun

overall: pay

he actually used some multies and had some flow

fuck yeah! thats it then right?
3 votes = me
good loox slinga'
i did like the 'greese in her knees' part tho
nice match