some old lyrics i found in my notebook that im abigious about recordin so maybe ya'll can help me out




alot of people take the game an abuse-it/
myrical lyrical abilities that can get aetheist spiritual cause they feelin me/
"quick" wits my minds to "agile" for "agility"/
spittin on cunk beats or ones with that slow soul melody/
cause im just a "kid" that likes to "play"-with-"words"/
each time i spit im pittin your new favorite-verse/
my peotic mind is illustrious/
an my "work"books are "industrious"/
i got bitches talkin some-fuck-me-shit/
it started with "symptoms" but now im so-"ill"/
that i "flow" on these "cold" beats like a "snow-mobile"/
fuck shady, im tryin to be like "vanilla ice" im so-"surreal"/
if i have to turn pop to sell a mill/
or just get a deal/
id say fuck it an stay low-fo-real/
im not gonna "sell" out-today/
im "chasin" my "dream", an im "8 miles"-away/
so now im "runnin"on each-"track"/
"eatin" mcs an now gettin positive "feedback"/
shit, my soul fuckin bleeds-rap

Nice vocab, i wasn't feelin your flow, partially cause' i didn't read all of it :P

Everything sounds good exept for one thing. "myrical lyrical abilities" is a direct use from eminem lyrics that go, I got miricale lyrical abilities all in me wit the agility to escape a killer bee collony. It just seems to me that you twisted the rest of the sentence to be your own. I'm not saying this is on purpose but what can I say?

actually i think i did bite that, i do bite pieces of lyrics every now an then it keeps me from gettin writers block, so i can keep writin, like i said its old so i forgot, my bad