links of feed:
http://www.eminemweb.com/board/showthread.php?t=24114
http://www.eminemweb.com/board/showthread.php?t=24107

this is just a freestyle....


you take it for granted should hold on to every second
turn the other way and run when death returns to beckon
i wasted most of mine listen and learn from my lesson
its not god im praying to its the devil that im testing
see if he really can make me drop in the streets
i doubt it, and remember that everyones unique
so when they say your wack or your never gona make it
just say your the best and your anything but basic
your the king your the queen your the best there ever was
do your thing smoke that green and fight for your cause
cause life can be given so quick but taken away quicker
look up to your idols there sick but your sicker
it aint always happy lifes a lonely place no doubt
the meaning of it you will eventually find out
i already know my meaning every scene i been in
theres no harm in dreaming my eyes are gleaming
with the thought of victory,money and hoes
as my money grows from funny flows at sold out shows
but at sometime you gotta wake up if you want it
you gotta work hard and even harder when you got it
cause people be working hard to take it all from you
you can be whatever you want though its all on you
never stop never flop the most precious thing you hold is time
never swap life for death hold on to all you got never drop a dime



just a quick flow on my opinion of life

il rep for feed

When you feel its time you should make some rhymes//
and go to hip hop shows with lotsa hoes, cause the true meanin' of life//
ain't carryin a knife//
and puttin it to ya wife//
you hold on tight and fight for your rights//
day or night if you know its right just stick to it wrong or right//
the light may be blight but its still there//
floatin' in the air, no dispair//
its carryin your hopes an' dreams, as it gleams and barely lights the darkness//
and even when you dead it rests in your carcass//


had to make more to that lol
nice job 1119

I like it man.. the conceptz good and everything.
Props

lol cool, and thanks (to em)

puncha much props on the feed (repped)

flow got off point at times ..
but still on track ..
freestyle stayed on subject ..
good +
difficutulity was pretty basic ..
mutli on and off ..
punches straight ..
overall it was coo lookin' freestyle ..
would of liked to see
more attempts at mutlis ..
and some deeper vocab for a "life concept"
freestyle, but overall it was nyce..
6.5/10

aight man, thanks for the feed

I guess ill have to say thanks too lol, just added a little wasn't lookin for a deep vocab but a good tip for next time

uppin this shit for a lil more feed..remember il rep for feed

great flow in my opinoin

but what do i know, i just started yesterday

i tought it was good for a freestyle..like the topic 6/10

yeah this wa hot and it was truth and thanks for responding to mine also homey

nice fow, brilliant lyrics, & overall it was really tight for a freestyle
but it needs more comlexicty I guess & some multies would make it alot better...the concept was dope. I really like it...

the best lines were the last bare:

"never stop never flop the most precious thing you hold is time
never swap life for death hold on to all you got never drop a dime"

^really ama-fuckin'-zing...