Rules:
6 bars
3-0 tk.o,4-1 k.o,1st to 5 votes wins
No hate/beef/n00b votes
Votes must be explained in categories.
No biting/swaying/recycling/feeding/bullshit.
24 hrs to check in and 24 hrs to drop
Show up late and yer dis-qualified

GoodLuck


aight me vs. XAS starts now u do the first line bro.

What do u mean do the 1st line??

24 hrs to check in and 24 hrs to drop
^READ!!


This is my Check!

I'm goin' out now,...i'll drop somethin' in a couple of hours...

-Pz-

Am Baaaaack!!!.......here's a quickie

I'm more Sicker than Killing An Unborn Foetus/
U couldn't be Above Me even if u were Jesus//
This guy's like an Ex-Boxer Wit Hands Cut-Off,U Got-No-Punches/
U couldn't see The Win as if yer PC Stopped-Its-Functions//
I can clearly say this guy's more Faker than a 10 Dollar Rolex/
Only time u Higher Than Me is when u on Weed and call yaself "The Dopest"//
Like the Temperatures In Antartica,this guy's Below-Average/
Your just a Show Bitch sort of like Pam Showin More-Cleavage//
If u On Top,then i'm the Hurricane that'll Rip U Off/
Your like a Bubblegum,I Chew U first and then Spit U Off//
This match is mine for the taking,kid,get that into yer systems/
'Cause the only time peeps Know Yer Name is When yer My Victim// (lol,BAM!!!)

Uppin' For Your Verse!

i dont like the moderazation incorperated in the rap, makes it seem a bit cheesy other then that pretty good

EDIT: this thread is for the two battlers to post their verses, and for people to vote, ONLY. save your opinion of xasphan's verse until it's time to vote!

This shit is better than anything you've ever done//
you rap your shit in a fuckin' pun//
you call me hun and grab my balls//
I slap you left and right till you falls//
Ill hang you in the halls on the walls and slap you wit a fuckin tricycle it's your call//
Battlin me is the worst shit you ever did, cause' im make you a fuckin baby wearin a bib//
man i would land on top if you were in a fuckin' jet up-side-down on fuckin' sundown//
my skin ain't brown but thats ok cause atleast i got some skills//
ill hit you hard and you'll fly over the hills//
and on all yo' bills it show that you were at gay bars kissin men, and what then?//
when i look at you all i see is a gay dude who skipped school//
you are what the germans call fuckin' shwul.

Uhhhh.....

No biting/swaying/recycling/FEEDING/bullshit.
^U quoted that yerself and then look at u starting yer bar V

When im your victim? when is that, ill attack your head, till its fat//
'Cause the only time peeps Know Yer Name is When yer My Victim//
My line....
Uhh,..that's called feeding,my friend.......u are DQ'd right now,..

ok, i'm really trying not to laugh at that...
punches: X
wordplay: X
flow: both were very average, but i'll give this to X
similes/meta's: X
and anything else goes to: X

AND ALSO, you're DQ'd, because in the rules it states "no feeding"
lmfao.. well done!

since X wants to let it slide, we'll let the votes ride out... lol

Yes,i'm still known as X,lmao..:cool: :D

1-0

man i suck, my first battle and i busted it, just really nervous

lol,.this thread can be closed,i guess......i win

dude there are more votes

U went against the rules,buddy.....so technically i win by a DQ

U went against the rules,buddy.....so technically i win by a DQ
i thought you were gonna let it slide??? make up your God damn mind kid!

lol@kid

Uhh,..that's called feeding,my friend.......u are DQ'd right now,..

Read it,fuckaaaa

oh so you wanna win by d huh lol aigbht if you that scared..

^lol

U have alot to learn,kiddo:)

fuck you, you edited your post you little punk!
fine, ChriS ViciouS wins by DQ