look closly at the lines,sometimes my flow is hard to find
thats cause i dont have to make sence
all i gota do is get shit of my chest, that keeps me tence
my backs up against the fence
brick wall in my way
wondering if im gonna make it or be somebody one day
climbing up the ladder, reaching for the top
stand back and watch the shit that i drop
bitchez be haten,and thats what i hate
but i dont worry cause it will come back to them
ITS CALLED FATE!



uppin for feed back

uppin for feedback people

the first line has 14 syllables and the second has 8, your right...your flow is hard to find lol if you just matched the syllables up and had some multies and metaphors it would be better, keep workin man.

i think flow is just how well u deliver, my syllables usually never match up but i can deliver the lyrics in a way in which it flows well, so if u can deliver dont worry about the syllables

u had some metaphors in there but they were cliche like the brick wall
up the multis an wordplay

lol theres still one artifag left ^^ since you aint been here let me inform you about somthin... ARTIFACT IS DEAD!!

It was good, but the flow was hard to find, and u need more multies lol, other than that good, keep droppin'

I found the flow, but don't mention my name in your little battles like you can do anything to me. I AM ABOVE YOU. I am not the best battler but I am better then you. Other then that I like your shit, keep it up. Peace, 749

lol^^ you aint that far above him

I found the flow, but don't mention my name in your little battles like you can do anything to me. I AM ABOVE YOU. I am not the best battler but I am better then you. Other then that I like your shit, keep it up. Peace, 749

yo i didnt mean no disrespect cuz

keep it easy

another quite horrible rhyme......yet another one lame ass with no skills lmfao.......j/king not really that bad...need more multis a bit longer rhyme would be nice...shit was mad simple and short........get more lines sit and think before just typin something onezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz