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McB^
04-04-2006, 02:53 PM
What ya say is what ya know
and that ain't much bro
ima' tap ya head fo' sap cause' dats all thats in there
cause' in you freestyle classes you weren't listening
cause' dissin
issent something you good at
tryin to be phat
but all you are as that
yea ur a fucked up cat
tryin to come in here and lay down rhymes (yea)
cause' all i heard was birds outside flyin'
I ain't lying or denyin'
but them birds was dyin'
you believe u have siege over me
but all i see on ya pants is pee
you must be scared that this aired
and you weren't prepared
to be wasted and basted and cooked
cause' im a real crook
so take a look at a hip-hop book
and try to decide if you will hide the next time u mess
with my lyrical mind
its time for me to go but don't be so sho
that you will rip this shit up cause'
cause i got a fuckin' gun to your pup.

theF5THdawg
04-04-2006, 08:46 PM
good flow ..
mutlis need work ..
punches straight foward ..
structure needs sum work ..

overall .. 6/10
Nice Style w/delivery ..
but still have room to elevate ..
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