Stanatic
04-03-2006, 05:31 AM
replied to Candor & Pricey
infinite-s.dmusic.com
1)
here a snippet of a song called "About life", it's suppose to be a collab with Advo & creflo but it seemed liked they changed their minds or somethin'
anyway, I'm planning to complete it unless any one would like to appeare on it...
PM me if you want to.
it's prolly the best I wrote till now tho' it's just a verse...it took me alot of time cuz I wanted to keep up with Advo cuz he's pretty dope so you know...
tell me what you think...
“About Life”
It’s New Year’s Eve, another 3ree 6ix 5ive
Here’s a plea text I’ve, wrote for a decent life
Every creature has a purpose mine is to agonize
‘n just to get more pain I’m doomed to lag in demise
Every road I take ends up with a fuckin’ detour
Leads to the same shit hole I was stuck in before
& so on, the never ending cycle keeps on growing
God please I’m moaning, I can’t feel my cheeks in morning
They become numb cuz of the icy tears that cover ‘em
I keep in fallin’, I keep using my fears as bufferin’
My ear is sufferin’ from an addiction to pain shout
Keeps on risin’ from my mouth till It’s drained out
I got sick of bein’ the one everybody misjudge
I got sick of bein’ patient to this grudge
That every body bears against me I can’t stand it
I just demanded respect, now I’m damn dead
From the inside & abandoned form the outside
I’m the outline of every pain about life
2)
I re-recorded the song "Lonely Roses"
when I first started to do it I re-wrote it to enhance the flow & to add some multies & when I was done it became somethin' else !!! so I teared up the paper cuz i'll be lying to myself when i say this shit is my 1st recorded song ever...so I just fixed the flow vocally (rushing in & stuff like that) so i can say it with no hesitaion, Lonely Roses is my 1st recorded song ever...
the quality is way better now & the piano line had been complicated a little
with few minor changes in the drums...
tell me what you think...
infinite-s.dmusic.com
1)
here a snippet of a song called "About life", it's suppose to be a collab with Advo & creflo but it seemed liked they changed their minds or somethin'
anyway, I'm planning to complete it unless any one would like to appeare on it...
PM me if you want to.
it's prolly the best I wrote till now tho' it's just a verse...it took me alot of time cuz I wanted to keep up with Advo cuz he's pretty dope so you know...
tell me what you think...
“About Life”
It’s New Year’s Eve, another 3ree 6ix 5ive
Here’s a plea text I’ve, wrote for a decent life
Every creature has a purpose mine is to agonize
‘n just to get more pain I’m doomed to lag in demise
Every road I take ends up with a fuckin’ detour
Leads to the same shit hole I was stuck in before
& so on, the never ending cycle keeps on growing
God please I’m moaning, I can’t feel my cheeks in morning
They become numb cuz of the icy tears that cover ‘em
I keep in fallin’, I keep using my fears as bufferin’
My ear is sufferin’ from an addiction to pain shout
Keeps on risin’ from my mouth till It’s drained out
I got sick of bein’ the one everybody misjudge
I got sick of bein’ patient to this grudge
That every body bears against me I can’t stand it
I just demanded respect, now I’m damn dead
From the inside & abandoned form the outside
I’m the outline of every pain about life
2)
I re-recorded the song "Lonely Roses"
when I first started to do it I re-wrote it to enhance the flow & to add some multies & when I was done it became somethin' else !!! so I teared up the paper cuz i'll be lying to myself when i say this shit is my 1st recorded song ever...so I just fixed the flow vocally (rushing in & stuff like that) so i can say it with no hesitaion, Lonely Roses is my 1st recorded song ever...
the quality is way better now & the piano line had been complicated a little
with few minor changes in the drums...
tell me what you think...