I spit it real i dont cange nothin, stay chron puffin, J stay blunted,

got 8 kegs G, the E leave you twisted like pepsi,

and you know J guns'll leave ya face messy,

dont play games, coke white like rolaids, platnum aNd gold chains,

yall dudes fake like tupes,

we squeeze triggers hard like almost empty toothpaste,

m16 and two 8s, leave you red like cool aid,

& i stay iced chain be 102k,

i stay looted like pirate from sellin coke and haze,

mess around & get knocked body smellin for days.

not bad room for improvement though, gotta work on the rhymes and the style but theres good content and decent flow, keep working.