View Full Version : a different rhyme from my last few....tell me what u think


soldier4eva69
10-18-2002, 09:04 PM
man i'm sick of lil faggots runnin dey mouth/
let's show them how it's done in the dirty south/
niggas at school tryin to mess with my gurl/
i think it's time i mess up dey world/
man i'm grow a short temper, they better stop before they get a head stone/
i really don't care what they think of me, so what if my feelins toward them are wrong/
i'm not about to stand and let them try to ruin my relationship/
hit'em so hard it'll send they brain for continueous flips/
by the time i'm done, pigs gonna put me on my knees, in cuffs/
i'm lookin for the day they get on dey knees and have enough/
now dey gonna learn to say outta my business/
now they gonna beg for my forgivness/
they in jail now, in a prison cell/
screaming cause i made they life a livin hell/
don't get me wrong, i just wanted revenge/
they messed up, bsuy filling up the sirenge/
all because i messed they word up/
so what if they couldn't see straigh, i gave them too much in dey cup/
now they in a metal institute..../
got aids from screwing the prositute/
it all started when they messed with my gurl/
then i showed them how i messed up they world/

soldier4eva69
10-21-2002, 06:53 PM
i know i didn't have a title for this one but i have one now...a lil late i know but it's titled "Revenge"

kidjragon
10-21-2002, 09:29 PM
straight bro.. i related to this shit cuz people start shit with me, cops ruin my fun and wannabe thugs try to pull a gun on me and get their asses whooped up and down the fuckin river. heh..
holla. nice bro...

AllAboutMe
10-21-2002, 10:17 PM
deep deep deep, thats the shit! keep improving soldier, got some talent
later

soldier4eva69
10-21-2002, 11:02 PM
thanks bros. !!!!!! peace out and i'z holla :D :D

KRONIK
10-21-2002, 11:17 PM
well...umm, that's an improvement. You've gotten better and you're startin to use multies and shit. Keep it up yo.

p~ceout!

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