man i can't think straight for this depression/
went metal at my last counciling session/
never will i turn to living on the streets/
people tryin to read my mind, lookin for the secret it keeps/
gettin over this depression seems to be impossible/
is it me or is it all just psychological/
i need help, o.d'ing on penicillin/
people say my rhymes aren't great, they not killin/
man this depression has me off track/
i'm even starting to think my thoughts are wack/
my head is throbbing, i'm gettin frustrated/
i feel like everything i do is dilopidated/
my life is is being ripped to shreads/
man, my body heat can't even be picked up on infareds/
sometimes i wish i could get rid of this hurt/
my self-esteam has been drug through the dirt/

peace

Some good bars some wack bars overall not bad do audio ;)

thanks for lettin me know...i'll work on it

peace out dawg

not bad, its true that a few line are not that great but most of the verse is good, rhymes are pretty simple but are good.

Ive noticed that "AllAboutMe" seems to follow Soldier around the board and reply to every single post...i think we should perform an IP check cuz somethings odd here