Just something short, BIG props to Carnage (thanks man), yeah...hi-fi doesnt wana work, it sounds chopped n screwed...so listen to either lo-fi or else download it...its at the top in my music. Feedback appreciated, thanks.

www.soundclick.com/priceyni

You were loud enough, for the most part, just didn't give it enough attitude. You should've turned the vocals up too, because sometimes no matter how loud you get the beat's just a little too loud. Also, some parts of your flow were off. You waited too long and said some words for too long. You need to say each syllable at a certain pace, rhymically instead of hooooooooooolding a word for too long.

This is good for your second audio though. You were on beat and shit. Which is a REALLY positive thing, considering that half of the people on the net don't know that they have to ride the snares. Keep it up, you'll definately elevate :)

Where you from Pricey? I can't tell the accent...but it sounds good. But like Carnage said, the beat is a little too loud.

Im from Northern Ireland

pssshhht.. i was the first one to listen this this lol... anyway yeah, after carnage gives feed back there's no point anyone else doin' it coz he pretty much says all you can say.. nice work man :)

i re-recorded after u listened man lol...but yea, carnage shits this shit down yo!

Just like me with feedback on text? Eh Advo? haha

I liked it, it was really good for a beginner...but just like Carnage said, you gotta be louder. you got a nice flow,rhymes, & overall it's good lyrically.
the beat is nice too. good work

I love your accent.
Are you sure your a beginner? Hot shit man. Keep it up. Send me your autograph.

I couldn't really make out what you were saying but you're flow seems pretty good. You need to rap with more energy and turn up your vocals like (yet again) Carnage said.

Thanks every1 for the feedback, repped where it would let me.

Peace

ims till waitin for u to upload the touch it intrumental

priceyyy .. i think everything was covered but i jus wanted to say uve already elevated from that first thing u sent me.. yeayo

Thanks :)

i couldnt hear it that much but you make some badass beats. probs man. and the lyrics are good

Thats a Lloyd Banks beat...

oh lol well still its a good beat