My time to grind im parlaying outside,
inside of my new ride,
ass up on buck hide,
smoking a camel wide,
Sliding front back side to side.
Hatas see me on the scene talking whos this lil nig,
ice so frozen to get in my jewelry box i need an ice pick,
oh no stop the flow im bout to get sick here it goes
how it goes is friends or foes catch bows
and bloody nose hoes get dirty dildos
kicked in with steel toes
for dissing mah flows
im a crack my trunk now system crack the ground for being so loud
now im so high i almost hit that cloud.
Screens fall from the sky so many screens in the ride
it looks like best buy,
taking your girls draws off listening to luther Vandross
on second though switch it to Al Green
mugg on mean got yo shit on lean,
freestyle with endurance,
get your eardrum some insurance,
and I'll keep my dogs behind the fence.
To a skezzer i teaser pleaser and leave her
i got more ice then a damp iceberg shirt in the freezer,
gun in the drawer you want more i got more guns then Gun's Galore
freestyles taking a tour and im just a starter
when i take a shit my dick hits the water,
not plexing yet just pushing for yall to try harder,
Im getting throwed and plan to go further
im thinkin throwed like the what chamillionaire
its da nigga Chop wit his name in his hair

good rhymes, couldnt really catch the flow,

hot verse!...later

same

same here!!!
peace

yo i'm not feelin ya flow.....it might just be me....but i think it needs some work

How come it needs work when i built it like that
u just need to die already mr im depressed

dude, i'm goin through some hard times......like i said...it's just me....i'm havin a hard time feelin alot of things right now...didn't mean to sound harsh...peace dawg....

dude, i'm goin through some hard times......like i said...it's just me....i'm havin a hard time feelin alot of things right now...didn't mean to sound harsh...peace dawg.... my ass

uggg.....nevermind....i'm tryin to keep from dissing....can we at least get on the same page? forget it.....we never spoke

fuck you Stuntastic or whatever tha fuck you call yaself now.

If you were going through hard times you wouldn't want some racist piece of shit messing with you - he gave you honest feedback.... be appreciative. Not everyones gonna like ya rhymes...

Just leave tha peeps that actually give feedback alone..

PZ>

Stunt...ya new name basically describes ya rhymes and ya attitude...."DIRE-BOLLOCKS-ALL"........you whack faggot.
Have you ever given a single piece of constructive feedback in your life?...The fact is you cant handle it that a lot of people dont like your shit..live with it you ignorant cunt.

This shit is phat. I'd love to hear another verse.

That verse was ill. I'd like to see how ill you'd be if you developed with multi's, but this reminds me of Lil Wayne circa 2000, or Ludacris lately.

That said, I think you should construct constructive criticism.

Y'all should get off his back though.

it was okay nothing too gr8 or over the top,.. but good

I don't think you even tried, I've seen soldier write better than this, this is skillless

"freestyles taking a tour and im just a starter
when i take a shit my dick hits the water"


"oh no stop the flow im bout to get sick here it goes
how it goes is friends or foes catch bows
and bloody nose hoes get dirty dildos
kicked in with steel toes
for dissing mah flows"- great flow on this one.... :rolleyes:

"To a skezzer i teaser pleaser and leave her
i got more ice then a damp iceberg shirt in the freezer,"

Come on Dejaun your better than this

Originally posted by []v[]CD
Stunt...ya new name basically describes ya rhymes and ya attitude...."DIRE-BOLLOCKS-ALL"........you whack faggot.
Have you ever given a single piece of constructive feedback in your life?...The fact is you cant handle it that a lot of people dont like your shit..live with it you ignorant cunt.

umm ok bitch im really wack when i killed u in a battle
and yes i have given constructive feedback
in school
and u dont know what the fuck i can handle
instead of worrying bout me worry about if ur dad is gonna rape
and like i really give a fuck if the white ppl on a message board like my shit
i know the black ppl in my hometown like my flows
i can wreck
something u dont know about u prep ass white kid

my hispanic friends think this is wack too, so you better include them in your racial tirade.

Originally posted by Chopper Style


umm ok bitch im really wack when i killed u in a battle
and yes i have given constructive feedback
in school
and u dont know what the fuck i can handle
instead of worrying bout me worry about if ur dad is gonna rape
and like i really give a fuck if the white ppl on a message board like my shit
i know the black ppl in my hometown like my flows
i can wreck
something u dont know about u prep ass white kid

Killed me in a battle?...you won 5-4 after about 5 weeks.....
Your an attention seeking little faget...your girlfriend's an ugly cum-stained-gums bitch..I really wanted you to die when you said you were depressed:( shame.
I know the "white people" in my town like my flows too..and the "black people"...i know a lot of people on these boards do too...just cuz someone doesnt like your shit you gotta act like a bitch?..lol..you'll get shot.

Thats funny
i wish u would say that shit to my face
and talk about my girl tho u never seen her
just cuz ur mom and dad are brother and sisters and u fuck ur grand mom dont mean u can talk about me
and i bet u wouldnt say all that bullshit to my face
u think since ur behind a computer i cant do nothing to u
but fuck it i aint wasting time on bitches like u that still post up text rhymes while im hittin the studios and droppin platinum hits 4eva n a day

Originally posted by Chopper Style
Thats funny
i wish u would say that shit to my face
and talk about my girl tho u never seen her
just cuz ur mom and dad are brother and sisters and u fuck ur grand mom dont mean u can talk about me
and i bet u wouldnt say all that bullshit to my face
u think since ur behind a computer i cant do nothing to u
but fuck it i aint wasting time on bitches like u that still post up text rhymes while im hittin the studios and droppin platinum hits 4eva n a day


platnium hits lol lol lol lol lol I couldn't type lol enough for that post....And Dejuan, we are all behind computer screens, so quit saying you'll kick someones ass in real life....

[I] dont knw aout platnium hits ??

dont know even if you can have a hit...

sorry but your ( and my qulaity suck ass) .... not good enough to be o a cd at all

Originally posted by Chopper Style

but fuck it i aint wasting time on bitches like u that still post up text rhymes

your rhyme was a text rhyme smart guy

LMFAO!^^^^^^^^^^...

ahahahahaha Stuntastic-tha-spastic!!!!!!!!!!!

well you posted one pic of this really ugly bitch..and next to her there was this even uglier bitch with a 'plastic forehead'..remember??..you said she was your girl:D
I'd be relieved for the sake of all humanity if she got ran over and died slowly..
Anyway..

"but fuck it i aint wasting time on bitches like u that still post up text rhymes"

^^yup..thats why ive been doing audio for the last 3 months you fucking Remedial simpleton.

Get your head out of your ass and your other head out of your dads ass and start paying attention.