my life is worn, touched by the grim reaper/
can't talk to anyone, depression growing deeper/
listening to faggots try to say they dissed/
really all it did was make many pissed/
it seems i'm playing a lil kiddy game/
it's like my life is headed staight toward the flames/
i need some time to sit back and reflect/
lookin at the mistakes i know i should correct/
i look into the eyes of others and see they don't care/
i hate this life, i've made my mistakes, it's just not fair/
i feel as though i just crawled in a corner and died/
i' feel stunned.......jaw dropped and stupified/
i hate my life, i'm growing worn and tired/
i feel like tellin God i quit instead of being fired/
i'm an outkast, i wanna runnaway/
i gave up on getting and my knees and starting to pray/
nobody can talk me outta my decision/
everytime i turn my back, i hear derision/


peace.........

You should just kill yourself and get it over with.

hahahahaha...your very fucking funny...

your fucking wack dude

aight...we'z been though dis before.........u say everyone's stuff is wack except for your own. so y start on me again?..cause u ain't gots nuthin else to do. which means u are WACK

i thought that shit was hot. nice deep rhymes, keep that shit up, good stuff

dont listen to him soldier4 he is just an ass,your shit man.....keep it up!!!

peace

sorry bout that i meant to say ur shit is hot i accidentaly erased a few words, sorry!!

Originally posted by -NinjaMic-
You should just kill yourself and get it over with.

:rolleyes:

Keep writing man, you'll imrove, your just using too basic vocab, and your rhymes are basic too

thanks for the feedback and support...peace out

Originally posted by eminemsgirl4lfe
your shit man

aight...listen here...what is your problem....i think someone just plain out stupid...i'm not gonna argue cause that's what u want...attention.....your not gonna get it

I think someone's plain out stupid too... you.

I think everyone is stupid

Have you ever posted a single piece of feedback in your life?..yet we have to put up with reading 3 pieces of your morbid shit per day:mad:

This was ok man, nothing majorly spectacular but a solid begining.. Rhymes were basic and the topic was fucked up.. But this was ok.. You'll develop with time..

eX

PS/ Peep my track I just posted..