first to 4 votes win
no dickryding votes that means jade,xasphan,doa,and lil birdy and any other hater votes doesnt count even if they voted for me.
no biting bitch

wanna talk shit? I'm fillin ya teeth with fist it's the only way you spittin a punch
leave carnage cryin like fat kids who get bullied out on lunch(haha)
you couldn't get a head check ya chicks got lock jaw
after skeetin-me-up she said you were to small to be sucked on like coffee-straws
I ain't takin you serious but your makin me sick and furious
me against you is a fuckin nasty sight like video tapin chick's periods
this geek's a fake i bet his lines are played
You cant beat the great slow down ill run thru yo ass at a cheetah's pace
your fucking with the lyrically gifted
who literally spits clips to leave you spiritually lifted
my bars is too tight and you lackin the bail
carnage's asshole burns at night like a faggot in jail
i know niggaz dat rape niggaz like carnage
have dat nigga giving jobs like the office for unemployment
im a menace in this ill finish this bitch diminishin shit
everybody who seen me spit already knows that i rip
if i dont win 5-0 fuck rap, ill do u the favor and quit

You're lame and you're wack, cracking your frame, your ass is insane, mastered this game
Say that I'm wack and trash, next thing I know, this kid's jacking my name

Now fuck off.

Hahahaahhahahhaahahahahaha U Dont Want It Wit Me

Someone please close this. This kid is a joke.

you fake

You're the one who's been doing this for at least 4 years and still hasn't gotten any better. You're the fake. I own you, bitch. You even stole my fucking name. You can be my new dickrider, ok, baby? Bye, I <3 you. Think about me. XXXXXXX0x0x0x0x

bitch i been having this name b4 i even knew yo mark ass.and mine is spelled differently and with a last name,and i damn sho wasnt thinkin bout yo bitch ass

and for your info i been rappin for 10 yrs hoe so i can change my style up in any way i want to

That's even worse!

Ok, so anyway. I vote for me. Doesn't say anywhere that I can't vote for me. So my vote = me. I had better quality multies and a nice personal, and no played shit either. Due to having better quality multies, I had a better flow too. That's why I vote me.

but bitch u aint drop 16,scary bitch

First of all, it doesn't say drop 16, second of all you didn't drop 16 bars either. One bar = two lines.

wutever bitch i been doing this shit better than yo mark ass so stop acting like a bitch and man up

I actually don't have to "man up," I'd rather think with my brain rather than thinking "like a man." "Rep" is nothing if you're a dumbass. Anyway, you quite clearly know nothing, since you thought 16 bars was 16 lines. So that just proves even more that there REALLY was no point in battling you.

what are bars then bitch cuz 16 lines sure do fit a verse on a beat dummy

not always, you idiot. Some verses are longer than others. A bar is 4 beats, that's why all Hip-Hop beats are 4/4 time.

Anyway, this is text not audio you fucking idiot. You know nothing!

Dejuan, Ben(Carnage) never accepted your battle- so why did you even post your stuff in here?

first to 4 votes win
no dickryding votes that means jade,xasphan,doa,and lil birdy and any other hater votes doesnt count even if they voted for me.
no biting bitch

wanna talk shit? I'm fillin ya teeth with fist it's the only way you spittin a punch
leave carnage cryin like fat kids who get bullied out on lunch(haha)
you couldn't get a head check ya chicks got lock jaw
after skeetin-me-up she said you were to small to be sucked on like coffee-straws
I ain't takin you serious but your makin me sick and furious
me against you is a fuckin nasty sight like video tapin chick's periods
this geek's a fake i bet his lines are played
You cant beat the great slow down ill run thru yo ass at a cheetah's pace
your fucking with the lyrically gifted
who literally spits clips to leave you spiritually lifted
my bars is too tight and you lackin the bail
carnage's asshole burns at night like a faggot in jail
i know niggaz dat rape niggaz like carnage
have dat nigga giving jobs like the office for unemployment
im a menace in this ill finish this bitch diminishin shit
everybody who seen me spit already knows that i rip
if i dont win 5-0 fuck rap, ill do u the favor and quit

Every single part of that is a filler, no personals at all. If you wanna battle someone at least find something out about them.

Dejuan, Ben(Carnage) never accepted your battle- so why did you even post your stuff in here?

Because he is a looosseeerrr

lmao carnage is owning you fool

He owned his with like....3 words.

bitch u dont even rap

Every single part of that is a filler, no personals at all. If you wanna battle someone at least find something out about them.
u gotta be kidding right?like i would go up to that bitch with a notebook and write a biography on him just to use personals.i dont need personals cuz i dont know these fucks on the internet and he dont know me either so he cant use personals.my shit was just str8 up disses with the little info that i do know about that bitch.hes a fag,he sucks,and his dad raped him

Dejuan, Ben(Carnage) never accepted your battle- so why did you even post your stuff in here?
that goes to show that he shouldnt talk so much shit if he cant back it up,if he so tight in his raps that he can beat other folks then he can try and beat me.now if yall bitches want some then ill drop something on yall bitches too.

See i know what Carnage is doing,he was waiting on me to post up my rap first and try very very hard to beat me,but i doubt it.

This is all coming from the same guy who can't even put a proper bar together due to the fact that he doesn't even know what a bar is.

bitch u dont even rap


If that was directed at me, which I'm sure it was, I don't need to rap to see when someone got OWNED!

what ever bitch,i guess u wanted me to put // that shit on there,i know what a fuckin bar is.u show me what a fuckin bar is since u kno so much

If that was directed at me, which I'm sure it was, I don't need to rap to see when someone got OWNED!
yeah bitch that was directed to u,and i aint get owned,that dude didnt do shit.his flow sucked,it was more like a chorus

No, I didn't want you to put /// at the end. That's for audio to split up your bars, lol. This is text. Two different things. A text bar = two lines.

2 lines of what

A set up line and then a punchline ie: a similie or metaphor punch, a personal or a wordplay punch.

not everybody do there raps that way

not everybody do there raps that way


Yes they do. In text anyway. That's why a bar is two lines, in text. So you can have your set up line and then your punchline. You have to have a punch each bar, lol. It's just the way it is. In audio you can just write the first thing that comes to your head, but not in text.

whatever dude u do u and i do me.so u gon get serious or what

You're wastin your time buddy, Just like carnage would be wasting his time if he was to battle you

Karnage Kassidy u fool,...why do u even call-out someone when ya' ignorant black ass don't even know what a bar is,fucker!

bitch u dont even rap

bitch i do rap what you thinnk i have onbe ko and one lose from just posting. you fuking dumnass damn your stupid

everyone hates this guy lol

lol all his money gos to his avatar cuz people put luv tha cock lmao

yall some stupid fucks and that bitch that said i dont know what a bar is must got HIV or something cuz that bitch damn sho is sick,i been here longer than yall bitches and battling longer than yall if i didnt know what a bar is and if i didnt put bars,someone prolly would have told me i didnt use bars.fuck yall,yall some fuckin redneck cow hick hillbillies how the fuck u gon tell me about rap.yall just use big words out of dictionaries and find other words that rhyme with it,totally talkin about nothing and u say its rap,yall bout worst than Shakespeare when he writes poems talkin about nothing.

ok heres my vote

punchez=the origenil carnage
metaz=the origenil carnage
similez=the origenil carnage
multiez=the origenil carnage

ova all kassidy got ur ass wopt......an ur verse wasnt really that good homez..

he aint even do 16 yall just dickriding,yall gon get pregnant

ha hah aha ha ha ha=))