What has happened in the last week
I thought everything was cool
But in that time I've felt a freak
it seems like your being cruel

You say you want me oh so bad
yet I do all the work
This is startin to get me mad
why you being a jerk

One small message is all I need
just to know your listening
I know your busy but I plead
yes it's you that I'm missing

I comprimised my life for you
your lust was overflowing
Every thing around's bran new
even though you were just towing

No I never doubted your feelings
even when you questioned mine
You told me to keep to the dealing
and thats what I remind

Myself of your ellusion
when you do not call
Those moments of confusion
I must not ever fall

Into those arms oh so sweet
I can not ever resist them
Untill the day you let us meet
will be just like in heaven

its almost is if you are just writing what you feel, and make every other line rhyme in the end. not much poetic substance really.

I apreciate ur input but not everyone writes in the same way what u like others may not and vice versa.

poetry comes in many forms and I am sorry if I don't write like I have a uni degree that is not my style. As for feeling, where the fuk do u think all works of art come from ur ass?

I may not cover things over with flowery wording but what I say means exactly the same thing wether or not I act like I am a stuck up, think I know everything ass wipe or someone trying to express themselves.

SO FUK OFF

lol, ok.