when i die please remember me
Because soon all i'll be is a memory
dead in my room, after them pills enter me
fuck bein happy, thats who i pretend to be
nuthin but tragedy on this road ahead of me
thats why drugs and liquior flow heavily
Besides death theres no remedy
No way to end the dreams
I wouldnt wish my nightmares on my enemies
Its all too much, not enough strength or energy
Grant me the serenity to accept the things ahead of me
and the courage to not be nervous and fufill my destiny
God coudnt react fast enough,so i ly dead in my sheets
Mother is destroyed, my suicide letter is read every week
goodbye everybody, wipe the tears from your cheek
and for all eternity remember me

fuk I hope ur not really thinkin like that.
Apart from scaring me with it's realism this is a fantastic poem.
I felt every word written u have deffinatly captured the exact essence.

Thanks for the feed... Finally someone understands my brilliance!!!

You FINALLY found yer abode..........in the poetry section,....lol,.J/P.....the poem was good

nice i think i heard that one be4 i still think its good

:-s this worries me. But it is a great poem. I love it Tom:)
Please, hang in there.

^ Oh i'll be hangin alright,lol

i tea bagged bern....lol

thats good shit man.. deep but good.

Thanks D

Deep but good?? Don't you mean deep and good.

^^^You tell um Jadey^^^


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