Aiyo i'm tired of all ya'll actin like pigz,
What is, is not wha ya see buh it livez//
Legitament reasonz aren't jus figmentz in ur imagination,
on occasion ya gotta realize ur infatuation//
with pain an hate you gotta debate it'z insane,
Treated wif disdain as plain as i can see//
ya think ur tha best you'll be defeated,
Fretin cauze ya think ur betta than me//
Ya act parsimoniosly bout race man why hate?,
Needa be harmonious an believe in people fer wha they are//
As ya mind unwindz you'll realize ur far off,
Wanna impede er incalidate humanic prgression?//
Jus cauze depression ya don't want ta lessen,
Tha hate ya create ya'll seem to connect as fate//
Don't be folly open ya eyez come on man,
Don't gotta be all jolly an ebullient//
Buh don't need empty hate an try ta get up an stand,
On ya own two feet not gettin very far no matta how high//
Banned from tha mind you neva tried ta find, stop ignoreance,
live with integrety an respect to go on with ur life//


umm yeah all feeback is appreciated...it'z been awhile :( ...thanx :) ...~oNe~......

I love you Ayane, your the bomb!

thanx tyke :p sorry i came on yesterday jus as ya left *doh*...ne one else??? :) ...~oNe~......

like i sid on aim.. i like your flow aot, you have a good concept and you stick to it ..
keep it up

i liked the content a lot, some of the rhymes could improve but rest is good. keep writhing

aww thanx guyz :) ...~oNe~......