Rules:
6 Bars (12 Lines)
3.0 K.O,4.1 TK.O,1st to 5 votes wins.
No Hate/Beef/D.R/Swaying votes.
Votes Must Be Explained In Categories.
No Biting/Recycling.
24 Hrs. To Check-In
24 Hrs. To Drop The Verse

GoodLuck!

This Is My Check-In

Ok man good luck, i'm gonna check in later as im goin to school in 20 mins

Don't worry,..u got 24 Hrs. time

Aightt.. checkin

Ohh babeeeee, babeeeee lets go....


I called out for newbies, xasphan reported in seriousness*
dat man is thwarted,bout 6 thousand posts n still aint experienced shit

If i was to change ya nickname,i'd change it to "happy tree friend"**
Cuz no matter ya spit,for u ,this battle aint ment to happily-end

This boardz public, but this battlez my own toy to play wit
datz cuz i'ma "OWN" "asspen"*in it like i was neo in matrix

Gotta hold breath,you stink.."i'm outta oxygen ta diss u!"
Sry for callin u "asspen"..datz all I could appr-oximate ya nick to

Yo, there's no possibility dat I could feel ya verse
in this game i'm like a terminator I dont feel but hurt

My shitz illogical, u can't comprehend this, it's magic
datz why i can kill you wit this line without doin no damage


Man
No offence, pure battle
* - I had posted in the lounge callin out for newbies
** - www.happytreefriends.com xD
* - I mean xasphen

Im Rapin-This-Noob why?cause the bitch's Achin-For-Feud,leave u Incomplete like ive just Taken-Yo-Boobs/ (Haha)
Fuck it,yo,i'll Break-Him-In-Two,Zooming in on this dude's deficient punches like i'm Tapin'-This-Fool//

How u gon' call yourself the puncha when that's what u Lack-In?/
Complimenting me,that's the only way u'll ever get to Clap-In(Clappin')//
For u the Win Percentage in this battle is like yer total Number-of-Posts/ *1
Bitch i'll make u Walk The Line more than a Tumbler-On-Ropes// *2
Dude,the only time u'll ever get to Bein' A Star is when yer in a Fancy Dress Contest/ (Haha)
My punches are sweeping through his Defences like this is a Conquest//
Puttin' this (-) shit ignorantly between words don't make It-A-Multi/
I'll get u to Scrapin' yer own scraps 'cause ya' Shits-All-Rusty//

Ya' Profile's-Done,i grabbed this Lowlife's-Cunt,gripped it tight and i tore him a Doorsized-One/ (Haha,....man,that's BIG!)
I Break Ya' teeth like Tooth Decay and u couldn't prevent me even if u had Fluoride-Son// *3

*1-He has less than 10 posts.
*2-Tumbler is an acrobat.
*3-Fluoride is a liquid that prevents tooth decay.

Aiight,people.....VOTES!

aight man good battle :)

u prolly took this, but anyway..votes

uppin

xasphan in pretty much everything,u did arright to puncha

^Can't be accepted.....u need to put it in categories

ok
flow:xas
Multis:xas
vocab:xas
punches:xas
metaphors:xas

overall:xas

if puncha would have had some more multis and some metas and vocab it would've been pretty good

Alright,..^thanxz,...1-0 uppin'

awight

opener-x
flow-x
punchez-x
multiez-tie but xs didnt seemd forced so x
wordplay-puncha
vocab-x
enjoyment-both but xs was jus fuckin good
closer-x got u on that to


good battle fellaz

Wordplay-Puncha???? lmao,..w/e...
Multies-Tie????.....lmao,...puncha tried multieing but failed horribly..

But thanxz anyways,...2-0....can someone finish this?

Uppin'...2-0

i had multies in every line apart the last

a multi isn't like how many times u rhyme in a line

a multi rhyme is for instance this : Know shit, go bitch, grow rich.. get what i mean ?

consistin of two or more words, and every syllable must rhyme

U had multies like:

X-X-X-X/
XX-X//

^This pattern doesn't qualify as a multi

Maybe you're right.. when u look at it as a TEXT, but nobody gives two shits about some kind of pattern when its a real spit

Pattern is very important in text.......

Anyways,...2-0 uppin'

i'm not sayin NO-maybe in text it is important...but in a real spit it doesnt make any difference, anyway..lets just leave this


vote ppl

......

I'm tired of waitin' for mothafuckers to vote......this battle is done.....i win!

Close this thread,mod!

flow:xasphan
Multis:xasphan
vocab:xasphan
punches:xasphan
metaphors:xasphan

overall:xasphan

no puncha your good dogg but i mean xasphan kills at it man

Finally someone finished this,..thanxz^

3-0....puncha's out