madi, this is for you, tho you'll never see it

Best Friends

Best friends we were,
I cared about you so much,
Our friendship so strong,
Nothing could touch,

But now I sit her alone,
Silent tears on my face,
Memories of what we had,
Ripping my heart from its place,

A gaping black hole,
Cut into my chest,
I look at my wrists,
Will I end all the rest?

Thin dark lines,
Traced down my arm,
An image of my soul,
Broken shattered calm,

Pieces of my essence,
Float freely around,
Hacked off my wings,
And threw me to the ground,

My sorrow fills the hole,
A steady beating ache,
More broken than I knew,
My world is starting to shake,

I can’t keep pretending,
Acting like I don’t mind,
All my emotions are dying,
Leaving me hollow and blind,

Pick me up from this,
Turn back the twisted clock,
The second I hurt you,
The world reeled in shock,

Let my depression come out,
Shot at those sweetest,
Hurt those I loved,
Became what I detest,

Please pick me up now,
Bring back my feeling,
Please save me from this,
Start the healing,

Know I will die,
If left in this dark,
I can’t go on without you,
Extinguish my fragile spark,

Love lost can’t be found,
No matter the desire,
Leave me in this open blank,
I will crawl to the fire,

I can take it all back,
How I wish I might,
But now I understand,
I lost the life fight.





gimme some feed.....and yeah, its something i wrote about amonth ago, so its straight from my heart, yeah....thanks peeps

Nice, it's good.:)

Very straight forward, vivid and real....I like it.....

thanks :)

good god that was fuking good i had shivers down my spine reading that. You have some serious natural talent. i mean it. this is the best one ive read yet

you think so?

thanks :)

yeah i was being serious i mean i duno if i was just in a weird mood or what but i really did have shivers down my spine

damn, thanks man :)

I love it hannah

thanks tom.