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avril 03-12-2006, 07:51 PM The soft flow through my hair
I really shouldn't have a care
Where has my life gone
I'm sure I must have got it wrong
Little miracals follow me round
one day I'm sure I'll hit the ground
Running on my way
if I don't I know I'll pay
This can not be all there is to come
it isn't enough for me a mom
Goals ambitions I have in my heart
I need someones help to find the start
Where to go, where to turn
someone to show me how to learn
To find the way inside myself
before I'm left to sit on the shelf
Prescious moments so few so far
but my time is still on par
With all the things I should have done
at least I can say I did have fun
avril 03-13-2006, 09:06 AM no body loves me every body hates me think I'll eat some worms..........
awwwwhhhh that tastes like shit !
DeA†h 03-13-2006, 09:38 AM no body loves me every body hates me think I'll eat some worms..........
U must be a really sad doctor:(
avril 03-13-2006, 09:43 AM hey wtf u talkin bout, I'm a poet
doctor pft u must have the wrong person buddy lol
DeA†h 03-13-2006, 09:46 AM lol,...ohhhh,....u faker....and i spewed on myself listenin' to u
avril 03-13-2006, 10:10 AM did u oh my god r u feelin alright? I hope u had a shower or else u might wake the neighbours
DeA†h 03-13-2006, 10:15 AM No,..i didn't take a shower.................no soap:mad:........I'll buy one
Yer dog borrowed one for the weekend and the lil' prick still hasn't returned it......
chelsy 03-13-2006, 10:16 AM ^^haaaahaa xas is really funny
chelsy 03-13-2006, 10:18 AM The soft flow through my hair
I really shouldn't have a care
Where has my life gone
I'm sure I must have got it wrong
Little miracals follow me round
one day I'm sure I'll hit the ground
Running on my way
if I don't I know I'll pay
This can not be all there is to come
it isn't enough for me a mom
Goals ambitions I have in my heart
I need someones help to find the start
Where to go, where to turn
someone to show me how to learn
To find the way inside myself
before I'm left to sit on the shelf
Prescious moments so few so far
but my time is still on par
With all the things I should have done
at least I can say I did have fun
like wow av...
*hugs tight n never leaves*
avril 03-13-2006, 10:22 AM AAAAWWWWW look my dog ate the soap now everyone thinks he has raibies and Chelsey gets a big hug from me cause she's gorgeous
DeA†h 03-13-2006, 10:24 AM Yer dog's crazy
chelsy 03-13-2006, 10:25 AM dog got rebees coz it ate xases soap!
avril 03-13-2006, 10:27 AM Yeh well it got it from him and I'm not that worried cause it wasn't even my dog
chelsy 03-13-2006, 10:28 AM *goes n hugs av. again tight*
avril 03-13-2006, 10:30 AM I know I don't know how I deal with these rabid animals, thanks darlin I needed that
DeA†h 03-13-2006, 10:37 AM Apart from a few spelling mistakes......yer poem was good
avril 03-13-2006, 10:40 AM Thank you but X I can't spell and u'll get over it everyone else has.
Thank you again but stop being like my uncle a teacher always correcting my errors
Well all this talk over a post seems shamed,i like it it seems someone really could get some idiea's off you ,lil_B
chelsy 03-13-2006, 02:30 PM what?
Khorne 04-02-2006, 05:06 AM the poem had good structure. i just dont feel an impact from any substance tho, it all just seems kinda flat and uninteresting tho that may b my personal opinion and i could be wrong
chelsy 04-02-2006, 10:54 AM ^wow! u really explain nice n proper!
tho yer wrong mate.. coz av z da baaaast!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:)
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