stop,time to clean up my act/
this aint a known fact, cuz im smokin this crack/
im tired of bein the bitch/
its time for someone else to be the witch/
it aint fun no more/
constantly callin my mom a crack hore/
im done callin names,n playin these games/
im packin up my life/
throwin away my knife/
ive got to make somethin of myself/
no longer gonna sit on the fuckin shelf/
i wanna be a rapper,this aint a known factor/
gonna stop doin these drugs/
wanna stop playin wit these thugs/
i had fun at first but now im done/
gonna put away my gun/
gonna say goodbye to my man/
cuz i aint his biggest fan/

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keep goin if u like......tell me how you feel....thanks

your rhymes are basic, try to work on vocab and go from there....

good flow......work on your word play like tyke said.


peace out gurl