Souls determined
Are you prepared ?
Only souls of are shoe''s can stomp you out
We require dedicate your burning on desire Find yourself one last dance
burning on demand hero's of our land
Swap it on your next date
Expiration is our class
Through weed's growing
No holding hand's
O escape through muddy gate's
Put on a pretty face and pass
Are you prepared for one last dance?
Enchanting cruelness of your stance
Memories brought together and advance
Nobodys into phobia's having a blast
No heart echoing except in the past
Blissful realization memories at last
Nothing matter's
Nothing triggers my passion
Can you stick it to me in my cast
Two shot's of vodka and one laugh
That's what i call my day
My revenge
My math
Need a compass to get to my path
When exaggeration muffles your heart
Sarcasm meet's you on term's I passed
No delivery on demand
Not fearing every chance
Everybody look at your reflection
And may you last..

Written by D@T 04

very differant, I read it a couple or times not quite sure yet where it's going but I think I like it. It definately has got me thinking so I guess it has done the job it was ment to. intrieging

i liked the ending, very deep. the whole thing had a dark tone.
however the main body contained alot of things that to me did not make sence. Either I lack the comprehensional capabilities cuase its so deep and meaningfull, or its just a bunch of shit thrown togethor that happend to rhyme.