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Jon Bon Jovi
03-10-2006, 11:52 AM
I know they are quite long but..if you <3 me read them :).
Written in the last few weeks:


A Single Rose. - I was just looking at this rose and this came to me lol

There it lied, a single creation,
Fading from the sun…
Little did it know, in silence,
Its’ life had just begun…
For in the depths of the rays it soaked,
Ready to bloom with a beauty so rare…
Waiting to find the water of life,
A single soul that would love and care…
And there he walked, and saw its’ light,
Fed it with honesty, watered it with love…
Nurtured it with only an understanding,
That could have come forth from a spirit above…
He gave it life with patience,
Enough encouragement to see its leaves aglow…
And while the rose bloomed to show her petals,
He gave to it a soul…

In promises of every tomorrow,
And vows of understanding all yesterdays…
In trust and faith, hope and love,
And knowledge of an emotion that never fades…
In a heart full of compassion,
And a love that remains true…
In these words of commitment and forever,
I vow these words to you…


I may not have the world in my hands,
Or the universe to give to you…
But I have the knowledge that I’ll stay near,
No matter the situations we go through…
For love is understanding,
And love never departs…
That’s the best lesson I learned,
The day you touched my heart…
For on the day that I fell in-love,
And my long-sleeping soul awoke,
You changed me from a wilting flower,
Into a gorgeous, blooming rose…


Helping Hand
The pain he caused, he'll never know,
For she hides it deep inside…
Laughs when the world abandons her,
And leaves her far behind…
It is normal in her world of tragedy,
For those to forget her in their past…
Always finding the "perfect" love,
But it is never meant to last…
They adore her and present her with their love,
And then leave her in the dust…
Proving that no man cares for her heart,
Just feels his constant lust…
Hearts broken, shattered pieces,
Lying on the hardwood floor…
Lying in a pool of tears and blood,
Crying, "I can't take this anymore…"
He moves on without a sense of uncertainty,
Just to find the next willing girl…
It's all about the money and sex,
That makes his perfect world…
She gives her heart, her love, her soul,
To the man who takes her all…
But in the end, they leave her, laughing,
As soon as they see her fall…
She falls too easy some may say,
As they go along the years…
But for every shattered piece of her heart,
Falls another broken tear…
No other girl will love them like she would,
But this, they'll never know…
For since she was not perfection,
They let this poor soul go…
And so, in tears, she cuts herself,
With initials from their names…
To show the world, it's not easy to cry,
But it is simple to live in shame…
She cries, she begs, "Please take me away!"
But they never hear her words…
She's too quiet, in her shy ways,
So she always ends up hurt…
"I am sick of being used like this!" she screams,
"A little doll upon the stand…"
"I am more than a pretty smile in this world,
I am a lost and reaching hand…"
"I am a forgotten child, left years ago,
When I was no longer perfect for you all…
They came and used me, one after another,
As I continued to fall…"
"I found true love, but let it go,
When I was too afraid…
And it seems, I'll never be loved,
By another angel again…"
"But I will not stand by and watch you wait,
Impatiently for me to cry…
I'll stand up tall, before you all,
And give love another try…"
"For I am stronger, than you think,
And I can face the day ahead…
All I need, is an arm to hold onto,
And a helping hand to get out of bed…"

Before
Baby, just give me one chance,
One try,
To make you melt,
Deep down inside…
One moment, one second,
One opportunity in time,
To make you find the reasons,
To not leave me behind…
Give me tomorrow,
And I'll show you,
What life is for…
When you open that window, baby,
I won't close the door…
Cause I'm seeing forever, eternity,
And when your words touch my heart,
It melts me deep inside…
As I fall harder for your love,
Each time that we talk
And I let go of…
Another falling tear…
Distance seperates us
From a love that should be…
But in time,
You'll begin to understand,
That you were meant for me…
And I can't say,
It will be easy…
I can't say,
There will be no fear…
I can't say,
There will be no trials,
Or that there will never be tears…
But those moments,
Make me stronger…
Along with the love I feel,
Inside…
And those moments,
Make me love you more,
And need you by my side…
Baby, just give me one chance,
One try…
To show you the love,
That is held in my eyes,
And I promise forever,
Eternity,
And more…
Cuz I'll love you like,
You've never been loved,
Before…
It'd maybe not physical
But..
boy it is real
Something about you
Just makes my heart race
just give me one chance,
One try…
To show you the love,
That is held in my eyes,
And I promise forever,
Eternity,
And more…
Cause I know I can show you
What you haven't seen
Before


Thank You- See if you can work out who/what this is about...lol.
I try to run from this terrifying place,
Where anger and wrath show on my face,
Where tears always fall and pain is my life,
Where I need a hand, or I wouldn’t survive.
I try to run from this frightening set,
But my agony from my past I can not forget,
And wherever I run, it follows me behind,
Till I don't trust myself, or mankind.
I try to run from this shocking room,
Where my life is just worries and gloom,
But wherever I am, there you always be,
Even though I tell you to forget about me.

I tell you I'm too scared, and to leave me alone,
But yet you stand by me, and keep me at home.
You never give up, though I walk away,
You always have the belief that I can be saved.
I know that it is terribly hard, but you try,
Though I push you away, you try to hold me when I criy
And although I am difficult, you always stand by,
You never give in to my wanting to die.

I run from a place of aching and shame,
Where I won't accept my face or my name.
Where it feels nobody love me, and my life is through,
I wanted to forget of my world, my fmily, and you.
But I wanted to run, so you would soon follow,
So you'd bring me home, and I'd be saved tomorrow.
And along you came; you brought me back home,
From a world where I was lost and on my own.
I would thank you, but it would be merely words,
To the ones who still helped me, though I caused them hurt.
Even "I love you" could never describe,
The way you stand by me when I want to die.
Thank you, I love you, you save me from shame,
When I am so close to falling into the grave.

It's true we can't talk nomore but,
word you have said help me out in this rut,
At times, you may feel, that you don’t help my tears,
Or that you don’t put aside my countless fears,
That you could do better, and help in more ways,
But if it wasn’t for you… I wouldn’t be here today.
You are the best person that you know how to be,
Thank you for keeping, for caring… and for loving me.

50 years ago
03-10-2006, 12:00 PM
"Before" is the best one, I <3 that one. Others are good, I'm feeling them. But I feel that in "Thank You"...the emotion ius great, but the rhymes feel a taaaaad forced.

DeA†h
03-10-2006, 12:00 PM
Damn,...they're good....i wish i could quote all lines

Jon Bon Jovi
03-10-2006, 12:19 PM
Thanks you two:)
Yeah the last one was a little forced. Thanks for your replies :)

Darkness
03-10-2006, 05:09 PM
Wow! Love all of them:)

Jon Bon Jovi
03-10-2006, 05:19 PM
Thank you baby!!!!!!!:D:-*

Jenuine
03-10-2006, 05:37 PM
Sweet:D

I <3 you Jade which rhymes with spade. And I wanna drink you like a cup of Lemonade.

Jon Bon Jovi
03-10-2006, 06:21 PM
Sweet:D

I <3 you Jade which rhymes with spade. And I wanna drink you like a cup of Lemonade.


:-* :-* :-*

50 years ago
03-11-2006, 12:21 AM
Those smilies just look like they're blowing bubble gum.

Jenuine
03-11-2006, 12:27 AM
Whatever they were, they were directed at ME:)

Jon Bon Jovi
03-11-2006, 01:10 PM
They sure were:).

D.O.A
03-11-2006, 02:48 PM
your full of suprises :D

very good, i liked them.

D.O.A
03-11-2006, 02:49 PM
Sweet:D

I <3 you Jade which rhymes with spade. And I wanna drink you like a cup of Lemonade.

LMAO...

Jon Bon Jovi
03-11-2006, 04:28 PM
lol, suprises?

D.O.A
03-11-2006, 05:15 PM
i just ment it was good, i was suprised.. :D