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soldier4eva69
10-15-2002, 11:25 PM
tired......beaten......shattered/
my hopes and dreams, shot and tattered/
i just want to leave this world...forget what i wrote/
it's all messed up......i can't even write the suicide note/
my breath and times runnin out...../
dieing without a shadow of a doubt/
i gave up my freedom...feels like i'm in hell/
trapped in the cold corner of my prison cell/
this smoke had got into my eyes, it's all hazy/
i'm flipping out, going all out crazy/

peace

AllAboutMe
10-16-2002, 12:07 AM
nice flow and good rhymes

soldier4eva69
10-17-2002, 06:29 PM
thanks dawg:) :D