Word by word, I let my thoughts form into shapes
Composing Poetry, so daily, as a chance of escape
It's great until I'm beggin' for care to exchange
For couple seconds of insight where one would arrange
An opinion, self-infliction, one's mind is estranged
Too strange, through my rants I admit I'm deranged...
It's a phase, something an individual must overcome
A stage, a dedicated period when I'm Crazee to some
I'm lazy and done, I can't continue on with myself
Refuting my own argument, I put my life on that shelf
I need help, I won't go on about saying it any other way
I'm astray and day by day I'm running out of things to say
I've yet to pay, a sensible soul that's been terrorized
My actions are inevitable yet they remain unjustified
I commit a crime, except it's an act with too many motives
It's reasonable to an extent, quite easy to be noticed
I'm explosive, trying to remain calm and cohesive
It's attempting enough when friends beg me "please if...
You help me out, I'll do anything for you"
Because it's humorous to know they haven't got a clue
"I'm not too fond of you," it hurts just as much
To when a stranger says "I know people like you and such"
It's a curse, and I sit here with complaints and cuts
Overdose my eyes with these tears 'cause they just won't shut
Self-Inflicted violence, my words advocate evasion
I scream out in silence as pain completes its invasion
Such sensation, self-expression limits my breath
Revealing myself to the world is pleading for death...

Cot damn, that poem pwns.

"It's a phase, something an individual must overcome
A stage, a dedicated period when I'm Crazee to some
I'm lazy and done, I can't continue on with myself
Refuting my own argument, I put my life on that shelf
I need help, I won't go on about saying it any other way
I'm astray and day by day I'm running out of things to say"

Word

^Word.....this one owns,...great deal of emotion.....10/10

:) Thanks guys. Laa feels <3ed.

Man, I know you use Crazee because you <3 me... but it's confused me reading your depressed poems that use it before because I was like "Is that a hint?" lmao

lol Who knows? Maybe they are clues...? :)...

Aww:)

Laa, I <3 it!!

"I've yet to pay, a sensible soul that's been terrorized
My actions are inevitable yet they remain unjustified
I commit a crime, except it's an act with too many motives
It's reasonable to an extent, quite easy to be noticed
I'm explosive, trying to remain calm and cohesive....."

Laa fait le Cri de Jen..:(

thats deep

baby it rocks!!!!
that is the best rap i have evvver read!!!
you r better than Eminem himself laa!!
yo!!

Thanks Jen and Instigator :)

And lol @ Chelsy.. I kind of doubt that but thanks anyways hun

Your welcome:)

haaa!!!
she meant me dork!!!!:(

Damn girl, that was awsome, i loved it...



I live like 2 hours from you laa, we should party,lol

thanks :)

lol really? where do you live?

Baaack offfffff

^ fuck you

thanks :)

lol really? where do you live?



Have you heard of stevens point? I live a little ways away from there

No really, you shouldn't have said "fuck off" lol

i own laa so back off all uuus moeronic hybrids//////

No really, you shouldn't have said "fuck off" lol



Why is that?

She'll get mad.

OH, woops

laas the best female rapper evver!!! hey i gav u 200 bucks 4 dat :)

Wow, thanks Chelsy.

And uh yeah.. "Tom," watch who you talk to, especially on my thread. It's clear enough Crazee pwns Laa. And that's that.

And no, Stevens Point is way more than 2 hours away from Milwaukee. Almost double of that. :)

I know but i live like 30 mins from Point, i dont exactly live in point

So it's even FURTHER away then, unless if it's 30 min. away from Steven's Point, towards Milwaukee. It's still faaaar. Shit, Chicago is like only an hour away.

That was definetly my favourite poem of yours that I've read.



pepperdaconvict

Yeah, I'm an hour from Laa.

..lol...weird

Anyway, great poem Laa. Love it.

Thank you guys :)

:thankyou:

dude i live close to u an tom i jus gota hop on 41 an crewz all a way down to the mil my cuz is moven there,.....dispite all that i liked ur poem the shit was raw....!

i loved it. if it had a physical form i would sex it, thats how good it was. you are better at so many things than me, things i aspire and dream of. and yet i am never jelous of you.

*hug*

and y'all fucking know shes mine. we are getting married.

lol awww thanks guys..

:) @ Piranah. We are SO getting married ... to our guys of course ;) lol.. and the reason you're never jealous is because there isn't anything to be jealous of. Laa is nothing. :(

but chea.. I appreciate the love.

Yes. you will marry your boy. and i will......umm.....marry myself :)

and no. its because i respect you, i have great affection for you and i see you have such skill. yuo work and you make effort....me...i gave up a long long time ago...

laa cannot be nothing. because laa is most def something. you are skilled, you are loving, you are smart, you are wise and you are respected.

Aww. Piranah. I REALLY feel like hugging you right now. You know exactly what to say. *hugs*

I appreciate you so much chica. You're the BEST. I don't even have to explain it. You're beautiful, smart, honest, loyal, modest, funny, loving, and just a GREAT person overall. I'd rep you but it won't let me lol.

Its mean.

I guess i have some moments when im not playing the slut role, when you get to see me...

thankyou laa, i see the same qualaties in you :)

as soon as i get to the states i shall hug you :)

And me.For I shall be there.

Yes, i shall hug you too. and you better be, after all you are the big bro.

Laa is beautiful, in all ways.

I'm more beautiful.

^^*raises eyebrow*

you are both beautiful people in some different ways and some similar ways.

looool @ Crazee. Well, when the lights are off..does it even matter? ;)

Anyways, I <3333 HANNAH AND JADE. Come on. Come over. We'll drink Sunkist or something.

sunkist with vodka?? and lollipops!!!

lol omg, that sounds hott lol

I should like write a poem about "My adventures with Hannah" lol

yep, that would be rad lol

I <3 you more!!!!!!! Let's party.

Anyone that loves Laa is down with me.As long as they respect.,..my territory.lol

hey, im your sister, so i can steal her!! :p

I just want to party with her!! You're safe Joshy.

*cough* yes *cough* party with her....

*looks innocent*

Lmao.hmm.

lol :)

what??

just because you think im a crazy sex driven bi-sexual with no other thoughts but sex...

:(

You are.

?

*cries*

i am not. i thuink of plenty of other things.

i love it laa.....*cries*

lol It's cool. I'm just not going to let people mess with Laa if I'm gonna be alone :(

i would never even try to steal laa from you.

you are both so beautiful and smart. you are like me and black. you click.

^ Awww. That means a lot. :)

Thanksssssssssss.. I love ya Hannah!

love ya too, its true tho. :)