lately i've been a bit high strung/
thinkin about da last song i sung/
realizing this is my chane, that's it/
tryin to put together my next rhyme to spit/
it's hard to think with a clouded mind/
i''m growing older and colder, i can't be kind/
forced to live with the memory of seeing my dad get shot/
lookin down the street, lookin at the bums smoking the pot/
been seen runnin through the streets of the ghetto/
frozen with fear, stuttering in my words, can't even say hello/
making up for all the time i lost doing stupid stuff/
now i have to make my choice, i think i've had enough/
i'm tryin to make my ends meet/
staying low, outta the heat/
wishin all this drama would cease/
on my knees prayin for nothin but peace/
tellin da truth, keepin it real/
stuck in my words, frozen still/


peace

I'll give it a c+ only if your Dad Really got shot

he did...it was in january of 1997

Wack, I feel yah lil wun...

lil wun?.....if u say.....peace tyke

At first I was gonna say the title should be wack.Then I read it.It was pretty good.I'd say a 7/10 cuz it was a deep kind of rhyme.Like Tyke said,a C+

thanks for the feedback......peace

i think it was aight..i'd say a 7/10 too....

..i think you got the potential to be ill dawg..you kinda remind me of me when i first came to d12board..posted new texts every single day, it really used to piss people off!!..but it helped to my advantage cuz i've improved so fuckin much(not sayin i'm ill) and now im onto audio...trust..keep doin this shit and you'll elevate like fuck!..keep it up dawg..pz

it was actually pretty damn good, sorry bout ya dad. keep it up.