New song...nice vibe to it, give feeback


www.soundclick.com/youngprezidentakayoungprez



http://www.eminemweb.com/board/showthread.php?t=20979

this shit is why hiphop sucks "nigga"

Okay AK, i didnt come up in here askin for a one sentence immature ass response, if it sucks tell me why so i can improve instead of disrespecting a nigga over the net.

Cause u got white boys runnin around sayin nigga left right and center, your content is all over the place and too mainstream. come up with something original, a main aspect of hiphop was speaking truth from the heart (if you know anything about hiphop, including the aspects of it, you would know what im talking about).

Well for starters im not white buddy. Secondly this was intended to be a semi-mainstream song to bop ya head to, since i felt the beat was commercial itself. If you listen to my other songs you'll see i do come up with original concepts and such things u speak about. And for the record i know more about hip hop than 95 percent of the cats in this forum. Thanks for the feed tho.

just as i thought another mockery

Candor must be yer alias

just as i thought another mockery


What do you mean?

it sucked

nah im just fuckin wit u,u just need to elavate your flow and delivery,the delivery is what ruined it for me.just keep tryin.u got lyrics its just ur delivery and flow