gravity i'll hit you so hard you'll have a fucken cavity
someone had to hit you up now you mad at me?/
2 years of probation i aint feelin it
your mum has a harder time dealing with her period/
i'll bury you in the ground,dead or alive,you wont be found/
you say i'll never know the feeling of being so low
and cuz you'll never know what its like to ryhme with flow
coming into this game young and being able to blow/
you must be drunk
you should be ashamed,go into hiding convert to a fuckin monk/
im like the others i'll kill myself if you dont quit
i cant beleive you got a record deal spitting that shit/
i may aswell kill myself now
hand me the clip!

not that many rhymes but hhmmm

hes better than u legend,but both of u need to be taught somthin that needs to be known if ur rappin.

lol,...quit sayin' they need to learn shit...........u need to elevate yerself!

they need to learn about syllables,i already know about syllables,count the syllables in my battle against lil matthew and they need to learn about multies to

Yea',.they need to learn ALOT....but YOU need to learn 'bout flow,similies/meta's,wordplay,vocab,punches(very important),opener/closure and u have alot of fillers(u need to lessen that)....

we should open a thread in the emcee area for people to learn everything about how to rap

hes better than u legend,but both of u need to be taught somthin that needs to be known if ur rappin.

cuz i just started

someone should open a thread that teaches everyone everything about how to rap

eh sirius black sis just gonna battle me alot for lie 4 months so im bound to get betta

wait overdose the dude dint even check in wtf you doing

Fuck! Does anybody even show up for battles anymore?