yo,
da name be nojoke get it i clap clowns,
blast rounds,
nigga i straight lay da smackdown,
on yall bitch niggas,
j hold figgas,
da boy joke hot- quik 2 gripp triggaz,
leave a nigga corpse in the basement wit big tigga,
my blade rif niggas,
my gauge hit niggas,
if yall creww deep pull out the 4fith nigga,
drill smuts like power tools thats what i do dog,
a nigga talk S*** get dead from 2 shots,
uh,
now who hot- J.Swiggy
, blast round 4 round cuz i got hate in me,
see u talk gangsta but u aint packin the heat,
come correct stay strapped like a passengers seat,
leave a niggas jaw wrapped like a package of meat,
aint no ballin a** niggas rappin like me,
u aint a thug ya steel cold- u aint bustin it,
your crew like norey cuz u dont want nuthin kid,
I'm a raged demon, the name be J scheamin,
I stay dubbeb- yeah that how I be man.

thats alright, rhymes need improvement but theres good creativity and good content , flow was pretty good, just gotta work on the lyric structure, keep it up, later.