got more skills then most niggas,
the gun will roast niggas,
the flow will choke niggas,
like shaq i post niggas,
like batman cuz u know i throw thangs,
u speak about your toyz but u neva show thangs,
kill niggas in close range,
cuz i got my flow tools,
i stay hot dog u know how JoKE do,
nojoke spit viciuos - this kid is so emaculant,
i got the chrone 9 and u no im straight blastin it,
eat u up you in a battle kid like i was a cannible,
slice ya freakin brains out and fryem up like hannible,
im a cannon yo,
cuz i blast the tech,
i got 8s to blast,
im fast to blast bregetts,
i b bently'ed out,
come on my blok and see what swigg be bout,
i been in this game yalll tryin to kick me out,
the shotty hit ya chest,
j holdin a grude kid,
and you nojoke bang more hammers than judges,
plucket ya nugget,
own yall niggas like puppets,
i dont really need a deal im still HOT F*** it,
i stay wit a white hooody like kkk,
i got the glok but i spray 8 at ya face,
j stay gunnin at yall slimey dudes,
you got a chain good i be shiny too,
grimey dude im like baby bigtymin dude,
you aint hot nigga who lied 2 u. HOLLA!!!



tell me what you think about it bad or good opinions. THANX!

still got good flow but you repeating works a lot, try using different words, makes it more interresting, the flow is really good, you got talent, keep going.

need to do some work...try to use different words, make it flow a lil better.